the beginning is really good but I have got the feeling you didn't put so much work in the end. It was mostly dialogue without intro perspective so one didn't feel the atmosphere. Also your tripping mistakes were annoying because the desturbed the reading flow and together with that many wrong injunctions it was hard to read it. In the beginning it wasn't as bad and the idea was good and there were feelings, but it's a shame that you didn't take the time to show the end well and read over your written chapter for correction.
I love the idea of Tony and Darcy as daughter father thing, it's also with good reason why they hide it. The brothers and sisters were cool and I liked their relationships (both families), nice work.
So good beginning, not so good ending and okay middle.
have a nice day, maybe you could look for the tipos in the last ten chapters and correct them,
greetings Sona

Cool

This idea was great!

*cackles* Awesome.

*pitches head over heels cackling*

Epic! And hilarious.

I am amused about Pepper's idea for the wedding gift. .

loved the story

Please continue this verse soon!

I think you could get a lot more out of the marriage announcement, and the scene that followed. But I flat out don't understand what happened in the first part of this.

Are these chapters in chronological order?

Okay, so Tony, Clint, John, and James Bond are all brothers. How come they all have different last names?

Oh, so that's how Darcy's related. It all makes sense now. So who'd Leonora marry? Is that your OC?

Wait, so who is Darcy's father? There's Uncle Clint, Uncle John, Uncle James, so who's the other brother? She said her dad was there. I feel like I'm missing something.

I have to wonder on how John would take to all this secrecy all around him concerning himself.