Reviews for Burnt
Guest chapter 1 . 2/21
That must’ve been a big azz oven then
Malchus-Fireheart chapter 17 . 7/26/2019
This is so awesome and emotional. Please update soon. Such a good story.
Malchus-Fireheart chapter 9 . 7/25/2019
Great story. Really enjoying it. You do all the characters really well and I like the interaction between them. Keep it up.
Guest chapter 17 . 2/10/2017
OMG please update
PeterPanfan13 chapter 17 . 8/31/2016
Pitch! You leave my baby Jack Alone! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Guest chapter 16 . 9/20/2015
Wow... I really must say... I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! It has been a while since I have read something as amazing as this. Hope you update soon! Keep up the good work. And DEFINATELY, keep wrighting!
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Snow white chapter 16 . 9/20/2015
Great
Deleted Account 23456765432 chapter 16 . 9/3/2015
I hate you, Pitch.
Deleted Account 23456765432 chapter 14 . 9/3/2015
Stupid Elves. This is their fault.
PeterPanfan13 chapter 16 . 9/3/2015
Great chapter!Hope to read more soon!
sasukexnaruxsakura chapter 16 . 9/3/2015
Pitch Can I kill him and I am worrying about Jack more than ever now.
Furostomi-chan chapter 15 . 7/16/2015
Great so far can't wait to read more. Hopefully soon. :) Thanks for sharing this.
Bibbledoo chapter 15 . 7/15/2015
And just when I thought the Black Sand bastard was going to cut some slack and just nurse him back to health...
*b**chslaps Pitch over three times*
Mark Of Serafina chapter 15 . 7/15/2015
So, it's a plan to turn Jack into the dark side? Horrible, Jack got an awful lot of hallucinations... :P Hope Jack actually gets recovered and not falling deeper and deeper into the abyss. Not to be a Grammar Nazi, but you have a lot of errors...
Sillia chapter 14 . 7/5/2015
c'est vraiment une super fanfiction!
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