This is amazing. I love your attention to detail, especially when jt comes to characters' thoughts and motivations. Obviously, the two protagonists are standouts in terms of characterization, but I love the tiny things/quirks that characters have, like Grover's slight insecurity when it comes to his friends. So far the plot has been satisfying and I'm excited to see where you take it.

This is less about your fic and a bit more about this fandom, and maybe FFN as a whole, but I appreciate how this isn't a gratuitous, wish-fulfillment-y (at least not as much as it could be) type of romance which is, unfortunately, a bit rare. Instead, this story is a mature, thoughtful, interesting, and, at times, exciting peep into these two characters lives and how they affect each other, and I cannot wait for more of it.

Thanks for writing!

OH MY GOD THIS STORY HAS FINALLY BEEN UPDATED THANK YOU SO MUCH YOU HAVE MADE MY LOCKDOWN

No but seriously I love this story, I hope you update again soon.

Loved this chapter! I completely understand if you would rather not, but if you are willing would you be able to give a short description of the events that took place in the last couple chapters from now on? Also, sorry to ask but was Leo introduced in this book, and if so what is his character background - I’m assuming he would be from Olympus Bc it suits his character but I’m totally blanking on whether or not he’s made an appearance yet. Alright thank you so much for again, another amazing chapter - you have such well developed vocabulary and I can’t wait to see what comes next :)

Also, your writing is very, very, very good. This story is A tier. I've read a lot of criminal/thug/gangster Percy stories, but nothing like this. All the characters are pretty much exactly the way they are in the books and it's great. I'm glad to see you're still updating this, so I will definitely await the next update.

No rush

Annabeth: Guys, this is Percy, my bf

Bobby and Matthew: .O.

*le gasp* This is a revived story? I saw the publish date, but just assumed you were slow with the updates. This brings joy

The bit where all the Olympians surrounded Percy was perfect

Damn, go Demeter

False. Annabeth can't expect a Spanish Inquisition because no one expects the Spanish Inquisition

"There's never a bad time to have cereal" Now that is some Aristotle level thinking right there

This was cute but I was also stressed that they wouldn’t like Percy, anyway I loved the chapter thank you!

Any chance of getting more? Love the story!

...coke?

Been a couple of months since I found this It's close to if not my favorite. The only thing I ask and you don't have to do this has Percy meet Annabeth parents or Athena

Just wanted to let you know you’re a really talented writer, and I’ve been pretty hooked on to this story. Keep at it.