Tsukishimaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! Tsukki Tsukki Tsukki!
Oops. He's glaring at me. . . . I am now going to run for my life. Bye!

Ahahaha i couldn't stop laughing XD " The magic of.. ROLLING THUNDER... AGAIN" PFTT AHAHAHA Thank you for making this fic and I shall wait for the next chapter 加油!(is it written like that? Ahahaha I really don't know ;P)

Japanese names really can be confusing, since Kiyoko and Asahi are actually the given names, not family names. So if you really want to follow the "have surnames as given names" Then in correction they should be Shimizu and Azumane, in stead. Otherwise, good luck on the story. I adore of having baby Karasuno team :)

I wish Kei Tsukishima follows this. (there IS an ff account named Kei Tsukishima)

MAMA SUGAAAAAAAAAAAA

Shouldn't it be Koushi Sawamura? Since Suga is just Sugawara being shortened...

But the story is brilliant! I loved it very much! Thank you for creating the story!

The last kid should be Yachi!

Btw I fell for that shameless ad you put in your review of my work Abacadabra...I put the title of my own fic, so I guess we're even! XD

BTW, just in case you didn't realize, but in the first chapter you wrote Suga Sawamura...Suga is short for Sugawara: his (her in this story) last name. And fourth wall breaking confuses me sometimes.
I adore DaiSuga, and the kids/team are so cute! I really like this story and please update soon!

is this your fist story? if so, this is hood for your fist story! keep writing and practicing! im excited for the next chapter (and story!)
is it reallg that surprising that daichi smiled? haha
and also i dont think i can guess what EVERYONE said but im almost sure that the last one was noya...

awwwe this story is super cute! i cant wait until the next chapter. is the new baby an oc? have fun writing