this is really good! the ambiguity of redemption... the story itself... all good content

more on kiyi and zuko please?

Greatness abounds!

I really like reading this. Seriously, NO ONE writes anything to do with Kiyi. Zukoadorable young child CUTNESS OVERLOAD

The story was chilling. They are horror stories he keeps telling her she just doesn't know any better. I like to imagine that after the discussion she had with her son, Ursa found an empty room, locked herself inside, went in the darkest corner and wept.

All of your stories struck me as being leagues above most of the other stories on this site, and now you've gone and written a story that was even better then the ones you already have. Well done

Awwwwww! *sniffles* This is sooo sweet.

Written like a true author. I loved this story, everything fit together so perfectly! Maybe you could add another chapter on it.

Wow that was amazing. I love how you put Azula's story into that bedtime story. Very well written and well done. Definitely going in my favorites :)

I liked your ending! On the one hand, I feel sorry for Ursa, for having to let her children grow up without her, and it's good that she's optimistic. On the other hand, though, I feel some sympathy for Zuko - Ursa should have to work for a closer relationship between them (it wasn't her fault, but still).

Not sure what I'm trying to say, but overall I enjoyed reading this (:

so many feels...

As much as I love your one-shots and how well-written they are, I really don't like how they've all managed to end on a sad note. They're so sad that I'm surprised that no one has died. I understand that the healing process is difficult, and I love how your stories are able to capture that, but at the same time, I wish I could see that healing come to fruition.

Woah. That was...unexpectedly tragic. I like Ursa's characterisation here and I love the story. What happened to Azula is probably the saddest thing ever and the whole perfection arc was brilliant. Seriously, well done.

What did I tell you... Amazing! That's what I said...
Again and again and again... 3 stories and each better than the other... 3 words is that soo I can think of many...

'You Are Amazing' 'Deserves An Award' 'Make Another One' 'I Am Serious'

I luv it! Fav'd make a sequel!