Please make more chapters.

Is this abandoned?

This chapter immediately made me quit as soon as Oak got to talking. Ridiculous, you made Ash OOC to get Gible to join, and it was completely unnecessary. Ash never frowned at evolving his team, only at forcing them to. Having Oak make up a reason to scold him was silly.

Genial gg

wow. amazing so far. hope you havent forgotten about this story or hit writers block

uh oh, this won't be pretty for dawn.

am I the only one who think that ash lost to trip on purpose! I mean, like pikachu said that it was ash's fault. and why do I feel like that little talk is going to have a big impact on the story? but then again, I could be wrong and nothing like that will happen. anyway, your battles are really good. I can't comment on other things, considering this chapter was mostly about battles. but still, a very awesome story. keep it up.

Heatran eh? Would this be a team mate of a certain Darkrai and Latios? It would make sense since Ash recognizes it's trainer and Tobias is I assume from Sinnoh, not that there is a known hometown for him. Altho, there is no way that Ash would ever forget Tobias and not recognise him immediately for who he is unless he drastically changed his appearance. Then again it could also be Pokemon Ranger Ben that capture that Heatran with Ash' help, however if I remember correctly that Heatran was suppose to go into some kind of pokemon reserve for it's own protection, so it seems unlikely that it's Ben. Tobias seems the more logical option. I hope you will update this story eventually as it has great potential.

I have been following this story since it's start and if I have only one thing to say it is that out of the hundreds of stories for this catagory that I have read this is easily in my top 5. You have a real gift for writing and I eagerly await the next update for this story.

nice what happens next

like XD

That was unbelievable and awesomeness

That's awesome and can't wait for mote

Classic Gible

It was awesome.

That Dragonite is tough