Reviews for Once a Goddess, Now a Spirit |
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archive4465 chapter 1 . 11/7/2019 update please |
Guest chapter 3 . 11/14/2017 updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate!plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzes an thanks! |
Guest chapter 3 . 10/12/2017 UPDATE EEE PLEASE! |
Guest chapter 3 . 9/30/2017 Dying for an update please ! *bows* |
Admiral Crow chapter 1 . 9/28/2017 Okay, I'm going to be blunt about this: this makes no sense. I mean, where's your sense of time and place? Things are just a jumbled mess, your grammar needs to be worked on, and generally everything needs to be looked over. Sorry for the little rant, but this story is a good and creative concept, and I like it. But try to at least improve on your writing. I suggest you try and get someone to beta-read for you. |
Yoshiki-909 chapter 2 . 7/12/2016 How long your gonna take for the next chapter, it's been too long |
pataponvideo chapter 1 . 8/11/2014 Shit is about to get real! |
F. Schwarze chapter 1 . 8/7/2014 It already is in the crossover section a few days ago. |
Seeker213 chapter 1 . 8/5/2014 Shouldn't this story be under the crossover section? |