Wait, why did it stop? This is awesome, legit hilarious. Emerald with a concussion may or may not be better than Emerald normally. Which is still like top ten best characters. In my opinion she ranks higher than Ruby herself.

it was great i loved it:]

This was actually completely adorable, which is not what I would have expected from a fic pairing Emerald and Mercury. I was pleasantly surprised when you managed to do the unexpected and still kept them in-character. XP
This was really cute! (I do kinda wish there'd been a kiss at the end, but it doesn't need one to be awesome!)

Wow, that was decent!

Wow, nice job!

I love this.

Very sweet, yet still managed to get their rivalry in there.
P.S.- Umm, not a problem with the story itself or anything, but you do realize that letting someone with a concussion fall asleep (no matter how adorably) can lead to a coma, right?

I know its been a long time since you wrote this but dang i loved it lol want moar XD

This level of cute should be illegal! Amazing fic!

Loved it, hilarious and adorable

Thanks for the story. I love it when the bad guys are just a bunch of violent dorks.

yea yeah ye yep yep yep A

uh, pretty sure the one thing you shouldn't do with a concussion is go to sleep. potentially fatal mistake on Mercury's part (he should've known to keep her awake) aside, this was amusing.

i loved it, and i think you wrote those characters really well

Best. Roman x Cinder. Fic. EVER