Best fic I've read. Wonderfully done. Love it.

Now this. This I like. Great Fic! I totally didn’t binge read the whole thing today.

Who the heck is this "Carslie" that you keep mentioning? I don't know anyone by that name in Twilight or Harry Potter. The closest I can come is Carlisle, but it's not even close to the same.

I'm getting completely fed up with your made-up word "seerer". Not a word. Doesn't exist. If you're talking about Alice, as in someone who has visions of the future, the word for such a person would be a seer or possibly seeress if you're referring to a female. Again, seerer is not a word and never has been iso STOP USING IT!

The head of a school is the principal, not a principle. Your inability to spell is getting really annoying.

seerer? Carslie? Are you just making these words up as you go along? Try reading what you've written sometime to see if it actually makes sense before you put it online.

Are you dyslexic? It's Denali, not Delani. It makes a difference.

"reigning himself in"
it's reining - like the reins of a horse. The other reign, with a G, is exclusive to royalty. The reign of a king or queen is the years that they are on the throne.

It's not per say - it's latin, per se. If you're going to use a saying, at least spell it correctly.

Aww, Neville is one of my favorites. I get why it had to happen but it's still sad.

Why am I not surprised that those two are related?

I ALWAYS ship a good Leaward!

What a fun tale! Thank you for all your hard work. I can only imagine the amount of time and creativity it takes to write a story of this quality.

why do you call him Harry when before you called him Hayden?

Soooo, vampires can fight & kill amongst themselves, but protect a human & you've broken a law? And her creating those newborns was against the law, because they were running uncontrolled, bringing too much attention to the vamps. ( Honestly, I'm in the gray area with how you've portrayed the Volturi as the good guys & the Cullens as the bad guys. ( I had hoped Harry would lean more toward the good side of the scale.