Why has it now been almost a year since you last updated? Please tell us you havent abandoned this?!

I absolutely love this fic and it's concept. Having a mark seems interesting. Good that you didn't overpower Ash as well, it's nice that you decided to give only 4 powers for a mark.

And Ralts! Goodness, Gardevoir is one of my top favs, tied with Absol. Elegant and graceful, and since they're psychics you can literally battle without verbally giving commands. Psychics give good edges over other opponents.

Looking forward to you updating this fic. Dialogue is a little cringey at times, but it can be overlooked with the developing plot :)

And hey, if you're ever out of ideas or putting this on adoption, would you consider letting me adopt it?

Good luck have fun with the fic! This fic is yours, do with it as you like, writing is about the author's enjoyment, after all.

wait this is the original story I thought this was a rewrite lmao

super hype to see this story livin

oh hey markeus is back, can't believe I didn't notice until now

looking great so far, can't wait until the next update

Love the story cant wait to read more!

Quite the interesting premise you got here, and I really like what's written so far. But there are some things I'd like some clarification about.

In chapter two you said that Ash would only have one Mega Evolution, although both Gardevoir and Lucario are capable of mega-evolving. So, do you mean that he can only mega-evolve once per battle, or is he only mega evolving one of his pokemon throughout the entire series?

Also, you said he would only have six pokemon, but is that six per region or only six for the whole fic? Or is the six number just for the first region, and he'll get more Pokemon in other regions, but not necessarily six?

For Pokemon suggestions, I'll go with Aggron and Kommo-o. Or their previous forms depending on when they are introduced. Giving them to a companion is fine if there isn't really any room for Ash's team.

This is amazing! I want more of this before 2021 please! I am eager to know what happens next. This could be as great as "Ashes of the Past" or "The Greatest There Was or Ever Will Be"!

Will you continue this story?

Oh, this is lovely!
I absolutely love "Chosen One" Ash, and Ash himself in general, and it's great to see a fic with him as Arceus' chosen but not surrounded by a harem, training legendaries ect, ect...
I like that he's a soft boy with the brash arrogance taken out, I like that he's a 'princess' dixit Ralt and easily lost in tought.(maybe because he wasn't bullied by Gary? Because he had Oak as a fatherly figure?)
Its sad that Delia was absent though but she's all badass and dangerous...
Still, poor Ash.
Anyway, I also really like Ralt as the starter and with Riolu now with them, it's even better!
The fact that they can only get six Pokemon is rather harsh but smart: those poor things languishing in those pc is a terrible thing and now I kinda feel bad for mine...
Well, I'll love reading the next chapter and thank you for your work!
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can't wait for the next chapter, loved this story when I first read it

Lol lol omg it's so funny I kind of feel sorry for oak now I sure hope his life insurance is up to date lolol

Thank you for updating again! I don't typically see people coming back from such a long break but it is sure welcomed. Bless your soul.

nice chapter thx for writing it

A solid chapter here.

yay and update, and an interesting use for Delia