Pleaseee pleasee continue this wonderful fanfic!

I’m hoping for a Harry/Daphne pair... Hermione is actually likeable in this, but she and Harry still don’t suit one another. Preferably Harry/Daphne, Neville/Hermione and then Luna as their honorary sister.

(1) about ten-twenty minutes by my guess.

Okay! Time for my first comment on this that isn’t a dig at Rowling, but at fanfic authors. You add notes to certain things explaining your reasoning and for most of them I have to agree. But number three is iffy and number four is nonsense. Number three could just be interpreted in several ways... influential? No. Rich? Doubt it. Wealthy? Sure. Reputable? Most definitely. That kind of thing. Number four however, goes by the assumption that there is such a thing as Lords and Ladies in this. Nowhere in canon is that apparent or even loosely implied. It’s purely a fanfic idea that has been so overdone that many authors just forget that it’s not canon. I don’t have an issue with it being done, mind you. I’m just saying you explain why you think the goblins would be civil with a friendly, future lord without explaining why you felt the need to add the lord/lady concept into this.

I see a chance to take a dig at Rowling, so I take it.

The whole Knight Bus fiasco is convenient plot to the max. How did him raising his wand summon it? He’s never even heard of the bloody thing so he couldn’t have intended to summon it... does that mean it gets summoned when ANYONE simply raises their wand?

If so, how the bloody hell do people have duels in public? Stopping Death Eaters would be easy: just station aurors on the bus and it’ll be summoned whenever they try and raid somewhere, since in order to cast spells they have to raise their wands, right?

Oh I hope to bloody god you don’t make Harry actually justify Snape’s treatment of him.

It’s fine! A grown man bullying an abused kid that he personally had a hand in orphaning because said abused kid looks like the father he never met... all because the father used to bully him until growing up, something Snape clearly isn’t capable of doing is perfectly FINE!

Any author who justifies Snape’s actions (including Rowling) is a raging fuckhead. My god.

RE to Guest: Yo, chill. Before you go caps locking the shit out of people, at least make sure you’re right else you’ll just look like more of a fool. Seeing as the one Dorea married is Charlus, Harry’s great-granduncle that means she’s not related to Harry by blood at all.

Hey great story...but do the eorld a favor and get a new computer!

Hogwarts is in Scotland, Neville mentioning Bloodrune swearing not to return to England is a pointless comment. Cedric is only a 5th year at this point.

HARRY'S GRANDMOTHER WAS NOT A BLACK!
HIS GRANDMOTHER WAS NOT DOREA POTTER! THAT WAS HIS FATHER'S GRANDMOTHER A.K.A HIS GREAT-GRANDMOTHER! HARRY'S GRANDMOTHER WAS EUPHEMIA POTTER AND HIS GRANDFATHER WAS FLEAMONT! NOT CHARLUS, WHO WAS HIS GREAT-GRANDFATHER!1

I love this story! Please keep going it’s got so many original concepts like the avatars of the old ones. Is Hedwig changing? Who what is the glowing man? What animagus is harry? Please keep writing!

Enjoying this so far, hope it will be continued soon.

I’m guessing that Bloodrunes apprentice is Bella, tho that may be semi obvious so unsure.

Great update.

"Yes, I have decided to go Harry/Hermione and Neville/Luna. But I do have plans for some weird little pairings to be spread throughout the story."

I only hope that you don't throughout the trope Hermione/Krum and Harry/Cho.

update please

this fic is amazing, wonderfull i hope you continue and that we can read a new chapter soon, please?