Well, I like how you literally punched Link (it still just doesn't feel right calling him Brandon... I'll get there eventually) out of his depression. What happened with Himari's accent, though? Is she just normally whatever that accent is? (Scottish? Irish? IDK) So, good chat, love the story, keep it going, and all that good stuff. Seriously, your writing styles blend perfectly, please keep doing this!

How can you give that fight scene only a 5-6/10!? I give it AT LEAST a 9.5. I really love your writing style (and just your writing). Please keep it up, and I agree with Tsu: stop being so negative!

I love the writing style of both of you, especially how you (presumably) infuse your personalities into the story. This is turning out very nicely, keep it up!

OMFG! The end note is hilarious. I think this is the only collaboration story that I've read past the second chapter. Very good collaboration; good work!

"Aww yis! Another awsome story done (so far)! Well, although you, *points at clumsy drawing of Link* and you *points at another, but of Tsu* are being annoyed by you, *points accusingly at a very detailed picture of a drunk Himari* mostly at the start, you did well on your first pokemon journey!"Exclaimed AGuyWithNoSkills, waving his hands around like the faggot he was, "Anyway, I apoligise about my new writing style, I'm just testing it out. Compare between my other reviews I gave Link and tell me which one you prefer. Please." NoSkills crossed his arms looking at those clearly bad pictures scetched onto seperate sheets of paper. "Himari needs a better picture though, better make a different one." He simply told himself, throwing the old picture of drunken Himari into a black hole in a middle of a white room, no doors, no nothing but a plain wooden table, chair, paper and pen, and some pokemon plushies. Carefully drawing a picture, it seemed to take shape as Himari, as a thin, short figure and holding half a cup of tea. Clearly scetched as it was in the exact same format as Link's and Tsu's scetches. "The main reason why im doing this is because I really wanna practice my English, and hopefully write a fan fic." He said to nobody in particular, still focussed in drawing Himari. "So please do tell me if this is alright for speech, as I'm not too fond with it." *Looks at screen, facing the audience* "The first part I fucked up on purpose. The others, not so much." He said, while preparing to leave, leaving behind the three drawings of the characters on the table. Still fixing his eyes onto the audience, he smiled and jumped into the wall, revealing it to be made out of paper. The open rip was black, just an empty hole in existence. Until NoSkills decided to come back and put a note down onto the desk. He stepped outside once again and fixed the rip as if it was a zipper. It was empty now, white as ever. Just the things he left in there now.
The note that NoSkills placed down onto the desk read: "Shit, forgot to add in the actual review. First ill be talking a bit about stuff. So Don't worry. For now ill keep doing that format, but in stuff like this, (notes, letters, what else..) It'll be normal. Well, this was hard to write, but actually fun. Never felt joy in writing stuff like this. Thanks Link and Tsu for helping me find it. :) I might make a story if I have time to do it. :) Okay, lets start the review now. Okay. So ive obviously read all of this, and I love it. Don't worry Tsu, I'm reading your other stories too. And Link, I'm not forgetting about you, as soon as a chapter is up, I'm off to read. Unless well, I'm at school or some shit like that. Whatever. I can see the difference in both your writing, but I don't want to explain it. I've never been good with explaining things, like why is all the milk gone and why I should drink some actual water for the first time in my life. Yeah. Anyway, you guys basically changed my opinion on which is better, school life or shit like that or adventuring. Now, I prefer stuff with houses and stuff like that, although some adventuring would be good once in a while. :) So. Isee that part of it is adventure, obviously, but I don't see the Humor side of it. (If you two don't know what the hell I'm talking about, check that genre type of shit. I really don't know much about it. ) is either that or I'm lacking my humor bone or some stupid shit Like that. I try.
From AGuyWithNoSkills, but you can call me.. NoSkills."
With that, the note ended and nothing was heard from there again. Well, until NoSkills comes back I suppose. (Yes, the narrator says 》I《 in this, but im only a noob. So dont slap me. Stab me instead. Goodbye nice sir/s!

YYYEEEHHH! I FINALLY FOUND THIIS! So sorry about that. Its um. Me being really happy to be reading another of HillianLink's stories. Im also happy that this is a collab! Yey! Well, probably only I know so far, but ive read all of Link's stories and im happy. He said stuff about you in his profile and possibly his stories and I couldn't wait to read this. Well the problem is that, I couldn't find it. But anyway! I'm here at last! As you can kinda see, I write quite a bit. If you look at HillianLink's story reviews. Almost all of them. I feel that im missing a few. But at least I read it all in 2 days. :) Now it seems that I have a lot of time on my hands, but im sacrificing my work time (homework) that my dad's forcing me to do and I'm skipping quite a bit. So! I'll be reading all of this! I'll see you at the latest chapter! Chapter 11!
From the one and only, not known at all,
AGuyWithNoSkills (sorry about that motto thing. Im kinda attached to it.)

The girl I like also has her birthday on the 26th

Hey, guys! Finally got around to really reading the rest of this. Now, I won't say much since I happen to dislike typing on my 2DS, but I quite like both of your chapters, I found them all enjoyable.

It's been so long since I said this...

Feral, out!

Di.

Nice chapter. I do have a question though are Half breeds going to play a large part in their adventure just wondering. I have to say the author note are fun to read

Cliffhangers o how I hate them! Anyways, I'm loving this story!L and T,( that is qhat I call you two now) my two favorite writers are working with each other on a story, hell to the ya! I can not wait to see what happens in this story!*Grins* I will be looking forward to seeing more chapters from you two.
From that crazy Absol, DJ Absolution

I don't know if anyone's ever told you this, but you two are great authors. I admire your stories. Keep up the good work.

A pretty nice battle scene, I'll say. Definitely leagues better than anything I could write. Good work. :)

I have one thing to say and one thing only... DICK USE HARDEN!

I REGRET ABSOLUTELY NOTHING!

For some reason I heard that author's note bit in Light Yagami's voice.

I'm slightly disturbed and amused.

Oh, and I think TsukianLink is a better ship name. Tsu plus Tsuki (Moon) plus Link.

It's going to be a running gag you nearly kill each other in the author's notes, isn't it?

Pretty nice chapter, even if it was only picking starters. Nice show of affection for some of your guys' favorite Pokemon.

Feral, out.

Di.

Hello I am a fan of both of you. And much to my dissapointment Ihave been seeing a lack of pokémorph material in this story. I am wondering if there will be such material in this story considering almost all of Sonatas stories and all of Brandons stories contain pokémorphs. Is this following the trend or is it just a trainer pokémon story? I would read it either way but just wondering.
Your faithful reader TreePyro