Howdy there, GraphicArtist13.

First off your writing is beautiful. Second off this story had so much passion in it. Third off, yes I did read the whole thing.

Got to admit your writing is a bit more powerful then what I'm used to. Right down I'm turning 50 shades of red from what I just read. This story is simply unforgettable.

From start to finish you established a tone and stuck with it. Also you varied your adjectives and did a great job maintaing a quick tempo. You could feel the energy in every scene and there was never a dull moment.

To be honest though I think it might take me a week to recover from this. This was an eye opening experience. As in my eyes were wide open in shock the entire way. Great job GraphicArtist13!

This story hit me like a brick. By the end of the story I was seeing stars. Probably because I forgot to breath a bit. Great job on the detail. Every scene was so vivid. No one can write quite like you can.

Actually a fun fact is that Naoko has stated that she actually likes to read stories like this and she'll often look at mature fan art. So I guess that writing this excellent story just makes you that much more like the creator of sailor moon.

Although I'm probably a bit outside of your target demographic I can't deny that this was a fantastic story from start to finish. Any one who reads this with an open mind will come away with a whole new way of looking at things.

Great job GraphicArtist13. You've done it again!

Oh, also you speak some japanese? Thats cool too. You are simply full of surprises.

Well stay awesome, stay you, and have a wonderful Christmas.

p.s. Have a happy new year too!

Howdy there, GraphicArtist13.

Gotta admit I didn't read this all the way. I might have skipped a scene or two. From what I did read you seem to be really good at this. Sorry that I don't have the guts to read all of your lovely work.

You caught me off guards again. I must admit that I'm rather thick. I should've figured it out by now. It's just the name, Mile High Club, reminds me of my favorite mission from a game I used to play when I was little.

I was far too distracted to realize what was happening. Next thing I know the scouts are . . . well any ways I apologize.

Great job as always GraphicArtist13. Even if I was too thick too appreciate your work I bet it got glowing reviews. I'd also like to congratulate you on keeping all the scouts in character. This is a very well written story. Keep up the great work GraphicArtist13.

So hottt 0\\\0,but i liked it.
Mako will have no more fear of flying.

Nice... There should definitely be another chapter. After all Makoto did say to needed to repay Ami.

I always love happy endings.

Well, so far you've only had one enthusiastic review for this WONDERFUL piece of Ami/Mako lemony fluff, so I'll add my voice to that.

As if you can't tell, I LOVED IT! Such a beautiful way to join the 'mile-high club', and THEN to add Rei, Usagi and Minako to the mix, well...I'll just say that I'm properly gobsmacked. Loved the story, loved your construction and descriptive style, so both you AND the story are now on my favorites list.

I'd stay longer and try to find more of your stories, but that'll have to wait for another day. 25 PAGES worth of new stories and chapter updates await me, and I must follow the Siren's call, even of there's a Veela waiting at the end.

Take care and be well. Ja ne for now.

"Tux"

This was awesome, I wasn't expecting the other girls to be going at it when ami and mako were done, and for them to join in the fun was just icing on the cake keep up the good work