Reviews for Knotted Hearts
Saint's Dead Girl chapter 1 . 3/15/2016
Fuck me you NEVER disappoint! I swear your work is amazing and utterly unmatched. I can see this one being right beside Gunpowder on my list.
Raevyn chapter 1 . 6/28/2015
Beautiful... Just so damn amazing and I can't even begin with the words really. But you my lovely talented writer are sheer gold... Thank you! Thank you :)
Mama's Stories chapter 1 . 11/4/2014
How do you know so much about ropes?
MacManusChick chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
"Knotted Hearts"...great title. A little tease of what's to come (ahem!) as well as letting the reader know the rope play is based in love. Perfect choice, my friend.

Right from the beginning, you had me. Connor's fascination with the knots on the dock explained the very beginning of his obsession with rope and the bond between the brothers was so strong and beautiful, as evidenced during his distraction. I love that Murphy was the protector in all this as well as the instigator later on; it was a nice change of pace from what is normally written about them.

Connor cumming with the belt around his thigh was hotter than I expected. Was it wrong that I laughed a dirty little laugh when he came on Murphy's sweater? No? Good because I kind of liked that part. A lot. The "Oh. Oh (in italics)" was a great touch as well.

As much as I loved Murphy's gifts to Connor, I loved Connor's gifts to Murphy more. Not just the knotted cord he put around his ankle, but his declaration of love...sweet, simple & heartfelt. I really like all that kissing they do too, it's quite sexy especially since they saved their kisses for only each other. True love, baby...true love. And thank you! for putting in the line about the stupid fucking rope. Very cool.

It's so sexy that Connor wears his knots and only Murphy knows about it. Damn, that's really hot.

You developed this story beautifully and you let it grow naturally...from the birth of Connor's fascination, to the development of his "hobby" to the maturation of his need for more, Murphy by his side the entire journey. That's very disciplined writing to not rush through it & something I strive for myself. Every word filled me with joy and that's no bullshit. I think my brain had an orgasm or two.

I wasn't sure if I'd like Gideon. As you know, I'm quite possessive of the twins and I get my hackles up whenever anyone else puts their hands on one or both of them. But you wrote an OFC that I actually liked, and that ain't easy 'cause I'm a tough sell. I liked Gideon's appreciation of Connor's knots and I really enjoyed his initial flirtations with Murphy, it was sexy and fun to see Murph in that capacity. But when the three of them were together and Murphy did more than just watch? YESSS! Fucking yes! I loved that. I'm so happy Murphy didn't just sit on the side or worse, leave. After all, he has a need himself.

It's funny because even though Gideon is a dom, I wasn't sure if he could hold his own with the two of them...not just sexually but in other ways. I probably wouldn't have had this thought if it was just one or the other but the MacManus twins are a formidable duo. But when Gideon displayed his understanding of French, I thought to myself that he'd do just fine with those two. And he handled the sex beautifully, he had control but also relented as well; he both dominated and submitted thereby showing through his actions that this was more than just a business arrangement.

The emerald green rope was the perfect choice for Connor, I could picture him all trussed up and looking so pretty. The anal beads added a very nice element to the sex play as well. The sex was hot, sticky and wonderfully erotic, which is exactly how I knew it would be and the swapping of cum from mouth to mouth put this story over the top for me. Like on a scale of 1-10, this story goes to 11.

Your epilogue held a touch of bittersweet that I coudn't help but admire. While the twins seemingly found what they'd been missing in their lives and were quite happy with their situation, it was obviously the day they'd be attacked by the Russians at McGinty's and begin their journey as the Saints. Really brilliant ending.

I tip my hat to you, my friend, and I am truly honored by your mention. This was amazing in every way.
0rchidd chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
I never thought to see another story with boys from you either but my god...I am over the fucking moon that you did this. I love these boys together and you masterfully write them. I love the connection and understanding they have for eachother, and I thought Gideon was a very lovely addition to their lives. If this was ment to be prequel to Feast on My Flesh it does leave the question of what happens to Gid? Wonderful story, wonderful sex, wonderful feels :)
mrsreedus69 chapter 1 . 8/3/2014
Oh how I needed this! This was delightfully dirty! Not only is your writing entertaining, it's educational as well! Shibari-who knew!
HaloHunter89 chapter 1 . 8/3/2014
I knew you couldn't stay away from our boys and rope! This was VERY well written. You are taking it further in exploration of that stupid fuckinb rope, lol. I could say thanks for that, again, but i think we both know where i stand. I love of sassy Murphy was. Loved it! Ive read so many with Connor always wanting control over him. Making him more submissive and quiet. This was great to see! I love you picked emerald rope! I can see that popping against his skin so beautifully. They worked their past Gideons defenses fast and rightly so. Again i want to say i love this!