Ok

Having fun in Lucia's?
Who's your friend?

See you're coming back on the high street after dark. Oooh, check you, getting braver again?

Where's my replacement?

Though you might deny it all you like, I now you liked what I did. You enjoyed it really, I now you miss me.

No but am I really that easy to replace? And which one was it? The blonde one or the dark haired one?

I'm sure if you'd let me, I would be way better than either- that is, if you don't get violent again.

Hey skank, saw you on Monday with two guys. Moved on from me so quickly? I'm insulted, was I not enough? But then again, maybe I'm too much for you. After all, what kind of person would lower themselves to your standard? Cos that's a long way for even the worse of guys to drop themselves too.
And where was he yesterday? You were looking lonely in Costa, was tempted to come say hi.

Missed me?
Sam W

Wow... The suspense is killing me! This AMAZING story needs to be updated every 24/7 it is that good! Loving it!

P.S I was too lazy to log in, sorry!

Hey, Captain,
I think this story is marvelous and I would love to see it continued. I would like to ask, is this on hiatus, or is it discontinued because it has been months since you updated this awesome story!

I can't believe you named a character after yourself.
I'm almost getting jealous over a fictional character. (I say almost... Alright, I'm jealous of a fictional character.) When you said you liked to write, I didn't realise how good you were- that sounds kinda rude. Please don't set Elizabeth on me. Or, you, actually! But this is amazing, much like you.
Sam

Guys, I am VERY sorry, but alas, this upcoming weekend's chapter is looking like it might not happen. I've been roped into going to Scotland AND banned from the laptop, because someone took/binned my iPod. Yes, you read that right. So with privaledges stripped away, you may only get updates from the CrapBerry for a while-but I'll try my hardest to post it!
Sorry, please forgive me! (I'll tell you how Anne Frank fares against: Cindrella, Frozen And The Lion King, despite the fact that you probably don't care!)
Exciting News still yet to be revealed.
Hannah!

Hey captain, thanks for the great chapter! I can not wait for the next instalment.

Hey Captain, it has been like, 13 days! Has something happened?! I know school is difficult but could you update your excellent story soon!:)Peace!

So another chapter, another chance to mess up a review! This chapter gave us an insight into how Kirk and Hannah are toghether, but cruelly destroyed that sweet image with a bitter argument. Spock is perfectly Spock-y and Bones' cameo is him to a tee. Kirk is left feeling helpless but he's brought it on himself. My only complaint would have to be the scene jumping as it feels quite choppy and doesn't really flow. However the actual content is very good and (although it could do with more detail) is [almost] up to your normal incredibly high standards.
[Please don't kill me]
Hugs, Elizabeth

Sorry I am not logged on but any way please post a new chapter soon I absolutely adore this story ! Cheers,"captain" :)

Hi Hannah. Firstly that got wierd quickly. Secondly, you got my hopes up, you meanie! But thirdly, I understand that your English COURSEWORK(!) is freaking you out so focus on that for now. Finally, please write a new chapter soon though! (I mean as soon as possible without having to ignore your [probably more important] schoolwork)
Hugs, Elizabeth
PS I can't be bothered to log in.