this is cute

OMFG, THE PLOT TWIST! XDDD Sorry I never reviewed before, but honestly is hilarious! I love how unexpected the "angry red marks" are in question until Inuyasha explains. (Honestly, upon rereading it for the first time in years, I thought it was gonna be about his childhood scars or something). Very clever twist! XDD

I love this fic so much. The idea of Kagome being unaware of her actions really tickles me.

Oh my ;)
You go Kagome :P

too cute. love this vignette

Short but sweet, and very cute. I liked it!

aww cute and funny

What! that's it?! noooo! that was like half a story! where's the rest?

That's so racy!
I thought that your conversation writing was really impressive. I can't really get that to happen in my writing, and it always comes out really stinted and awkward. I don't know what it is, but your conversational writing is really smooth to me. I can see what they're doing while they're talking but it doesn't seem like it's interrupting the talking either.
Of course, all the sexual innuendo helps but that's obvious, isn't it?

Hi! I really liked this story. It was so cute and funny. Great one shot.

I really liked this, it was cute and sweet! I loved the comfortableness between them in their marriage. I also don't think you need to worry about trying to "push the line" past "prudishness". To me pushing the line isn't really a sign of a great writer, just a tactic to attract attention. I think your a great writer and your writing can attract loyal fans without the need to push the line! I'm looking forward to reading more of your work!

Take care and God bless!

I really like the one shot

Good, funny story. Keep up the great work! : )