Bitter sweet. A rather excellent well-written one shot though.

This story was really cute and a lot of fun!

Oh my gosh.
I so want to read when Ren asks Kyoko her wish.
Good work.

Love it! Nice job :)

You made Sho look much nicer, nicer not nice, however it's still something.

Nuoooo don't end it yet!

Nice fic. I like your solution for the realizing moment of Kyoko.

Awww, I really like this! x3 I'm soooo glad Kyoko finally realized how Ren feels about her, and I like that you implied that they /will/ get together without going off-topic to actually get them together! And I'm a big fan of Sho beating himself up wishing he could have what he threw away! x33 Very well done! I also love how you managed to squeeze all of those musts in! xD

You did really well! I love this story. Haha! Die, Sho! Anyway. I think you actually did a very good job characterizing Tsuruga, even if he was a bit more vulnerable. Anyway I loved! Thank you for writing!

I enjoyed this sweetie even if as you said it was a little OOC on Ren's part I always love a little kick in the balls so to speak for Sho :D it's just what he deserves!

cute. loved the inadvertent confession bit.

Nicely done love it

One of the best Bo moments...!
Good job mixing up the odd requests, too!

I loved this!

Bravo! I applaud you for pulling this off, even with all of my strange requirements. xD Kyoko seemed a bit rushed at the end, but the rest was fabulous. I enjoyed all the minor mental breakdowns.