Reviews for New Wind Nation: Alliance
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 12 . 7/20
Well that was interesting. Naruto doing great/winning one on one and then assisting with two other battles was pretty great. Sasuke not getting the hickey mark was great. Gaara being a mentor was cute. Sasuke winning the tournament seems like bullshit. Hinata and Neji coming to some kind of understanding with less hostility on his part is nice. And Naruto mother-henning Gaara is funny. The only real disappointment is that they only had 3 high rank ninjas "prepared" to fight Orochimaru in this oh-so grand trap and the creep not only got away but with hardly a scratch. Clearly...they suck. Why on earth was Jiraiya not taking the fight seriously just cuz Orochimaru wasn't? That was a great opportunity to exploit in order to murder that traitor dead quickly. But he just...didn't. Like a dummy. Nice job regardless tho.
suzukashinobi chapter 2 . 7/20
I keep expecting you to point the finger at Danzo as the reason Kushina left Konoha. Even without the Kyuubi, Naruto would still be rocking the Uzumaki clan's legendary chakra reserves! That would make him a pretty tempting target for ROOT.
Kage-Shino chapter 10 . 6/5
Calling it Uzukaze no Jutsu would be hilarious and perfect. Just saying...
Kage-Shino chapter 1 . 6/5
HAHAHAHAH RASA, YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT YOU'VE GOTTEN YOURSELF INTO! NEXT YOU KNOW, YOU'LL BE BEST BUDDIES WITH HIRUZEN AND A DOTING FATHER.
CaliArena chapter 12 . 1/7
I could wait five years more to read a sequel of this.
I loved it!
gazal.blirf chapter 12 . 3/20/2019
Ooooh it was great! Can you dm me when you write the sequel? Or if you dont plan to? (Doesnt really have a time limit I will be happy if you respond in 2030)
Anyway! Good luck with life or something ;* !
Mashrose chapter 12 . 1/8/2019
Nooooo! The End!
Heart chapter 12 . 8/18/2018
Dududduuuuuun~
Heart chapter 11 . 8/18/2018
Eeeereeey~ Character development~ Love it
Heart chapter 7 . 8/18/2018
wat. ... didn't see that coming
Heart chapter 6 . 8/18/2018
Ha! Those twos relationship! *eye sparkke* Eh? Jiraiya? Responsible?
Heart chapter 5 . 8/18/2018
*eye smile*
Heart chapter 4 . 8/18/2018
*clap clap clap* Kimmi! Oooh Kakashi... Aw Isa... *closed eye smile*
Heart chapter 1 . 8/18/2018
*beams aggressively* YAS! This-I yes. Even tho I wanted to snack my hand against my forehead repeatedly when I saw the nickname...yes to all of this. XD And you're right. Naruto wouldn't back down! :D
Lil Hamari chapter 12 . 7/29/2018
I hope you write the next sequel
It’s a very fantastic story and I absolutely adore it
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