This is a great one-shot. But I really wish it could have been continued into a story!

Good story

I love this and I was about to cry. So. . . I know it's been around 4 years, but could you make a sequel to this? I'd really enjoy reading on what happens next. Well, if you don't, that's fine!

Aww is that it? Can there please be more? PLEEEASE!

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This was sad yet so cute! Now I wanna know what happens next! :D You did a great job on this one-shot

You know, overall minato is one of my least favorite characters after kakashi, sakura and sandaime. No because of the way he is potrayed here, but the way his character is desolved in characters. He is the renown genius and best shinobi overall but the worst father in the universe. He thought far ahead to create a seal to ensure that konoha has a jinchuriki and created/learned a completely different new seal just in case Kushina seal fail. But he did not even reserve any thought to protect him after the sealing. Seriously, it pissed me off that he was worship for defeating the kyubi. Hokage are not supposed to be fathers if they dont take responsibilities for their actions. Minato, sandaime and naruto (I preferred him when he wasnt hokage). He is a coward, oh here naruto the power to defeat a enemy that I created myself. I am proud my son in the seal 16 year later, after he made his life a living hell. No thank you. Oh please, a stranger could have done that.

please! write a sequel to this story. i want to read more

I need to read the authors notes before reading things. Hate yaoi. Regardless this world is a great one, i would love to see how it would play out. - the yaoi of course.

OMG, this universe, I want it to be expanded so badly. Obito being alive, escaping Madara's clutches and Madara being dead, Obito taking the initiative and him and Kakashi taking care of Naruto. Sasuke's heart reacting to Naruto. I'm glad you did mention about the grieving, I still dislike Minato though, not being able to look at Naruto, never apologizing to the actual person he's suppose to apologize to, throwing Obito on missions to keep him away from the younger generation no matter how he justifies it. Absolutely ridiculous how the village is to Naruto and Obito. Giving people a reason to hate your village... stuff like that makes me not care as mch when the peolle tbey hurt get back at them. Thank you so much for writing this!

Faz uma sequela por favor.

Nice story. I was going to click the next button but then I realised, IT only has 1 CHAPTER! OAO Will u write a sequel for this story?

A very interesting story that would really need a sequel !

I liked it, poor Naruto, I can't wait to see what happens next.

If you ever make this longer, I'll be the happiest person in the world.