Chapter 8
"Where did the prank on Lockhart come into it?"
"I was just that, prank. Oh, sure, it was also a distraction, but mostly a prank."

Chapter 2
Wait, what?

I like the story and I hope that you are working on the revamp and enjoying it. Don't be afraid to make changes and see how thing go. Also, there are details I am sure Su missed if she didn't read all four books more than once. Because she hasn't said anything about Barty Crouch Jr.

So Luna gives it back to Ginny and Su only basically ended up being like Harry with his short encounter with it, only slightly longer since it did possess her but not Harry. They think it's destroyed. Dobby will need to tell them. At least he realized what it was.

Poor Su, falling victim to the diary despite having read the book and knowing how this ends. Hopefully with her friends around and Bea and Nathan they can get it away from her and get it destroyed properly. I love the idea of not informing Dumbledore about Harry's plans for Christmas.

Dumbledore is a real ass. Even when confronted with information with Amelia Bones right there he was going to leave Sirius to rot. It's so weird that people would believe Sirius would turn against James Potter when the two had spent all seven years of Hogwarts and post Hogwarts as brothers. I am happy that the plan worked but Su is forgetting that there's a compulsion on the diary to make you want to write in it if you keep it close. It's dangerous that she has that, but I am not sure I trust Dumbledore or Bones with it.

Su would have been better off to stay where she was. Lockhart is a menane with oblivitation spells and it's going to cause a mess.

I agreed with her rant and Harry/Ginny as a pairing made no sense other than the fact that she was the only girl he was allowed to be around outside of school once Hermione was deemed off the table so Ron would have a love interest.

Love this story and the previous one! Great work, hope to see more!

more please

J hate when dumbelfo

Just read the two stories in one go, I really love how original this is! Hoping you come back with a fresh head and update soon. I get your point about 2nd year being a bit off the rails to 1st year.

Should still be proud of your story overall, can't wait for more :)

Sounds good! Will you post here again when the new story is up?

please update immediately

Awesome story