I am always that person who walks out of the movie theater and has a hard time going back to reality after a really amazing movie and finishing this story was like the exact same experience times a hundred. I enjoyed your story immensely and adore how you wrapped everything up at the end, especially with how you included that note from Kanda. Beautiful work!

I cried...god I love thissssss

This book gave me another form of hate for leverrier right now

I've been reading this none stop since yesterday. I have cried and smiled over this story and am truly sad it has come to an end. The last part where Allen got to see the sunrise and have it as his last memory was a tear breaker for me.
Amazing story and such a unique and different plot.

Okay I cannot say how much my heart hurts because he forgot everything I wanna cry like wtf I'm not lying I hate you so much right now

Can we get a spin off ending of where he remembers everything? If only to ease my heart?

Everyone saying it’s sooo good. So I’m going to do this lol

That was so bittersweet but I liked the ending. It’s a chance to start over and make things better and in the end that’s what they all need I guess. I agree that often times something has to be given for true happiness. For Red that was the few happy memories he had for a chance of something better. I’m sorry I waited so long to read this story. Now I have to finish the tempest.

Oh god. This is beautiful but my heart. It’s breaking

Gosh I dont know where to start. Maybe by the fact I started reading it earlier in the day, and then I got so hooked I spend my day reading it all. I think I only paused once after the first few chapters to play, but I couldnt play for long and I had this urge to read more. Of course I paused for a drink or food, but I couldnt pull myself to do anything else.

The plot is so great, winks at how canon DGM is, but also just yours. I do think you say this was inspired for original work, and boy would I want to read the original stuff too. The interactions, the slow building, my heart has been pained and soothed and pained and soothed so many time! The Noahs slowly opening to Allen, Allen himself opening up, and while I cant help just saying Allen, I do love that Red followed Allen (compared to canon you know, where Allen followed Allen). Wisely in his quest to help Allen, I want to hug him. The number of times Mana said something that just made me scream because this IS your son ahh!
I love too that the plot focused on the relationships, but then we had Leverrier plan come to light, and then Nea. I caught on that moment of Wisely saying someone might be stubborn, and I knew that even if they suggested Mana, it might not be him. I was hesitating between Allen himself or Nea, had a moment of thinking it had been Mana and it passed, then quite honestly, I only recalled my suspicion when Allen himself felt wrong about how Nea was.

I really loved this story, and this is why the bittersweet ending hurt me so much XD I honestly am very tempted to make puppy eyes for a softer, happier ending where Allen keeps his memories and works through the past transgressions. While I can understand his reasoning, it doesn't feel as if Allen is really there after he forgets. And if I was a Noah, no matter how much I would know he did that to not that bad blood between us, I would forever be unsure if his happiness and forgiveness is true, because wouldnt the Allen in front of me NOT know what he's "forgiving"?
I dont think thats what you intended, but there's also the implication that Allen wouldn't be able to love his family enough? He chose to forget because he knew otherwise he wouldn't be able to truly live happily, but it gives the question of wouldn't love mean you want to work through it? Even if there's the risk of feeling unsure, forgetting implies not trusting that people will reassure you, and ultimately robbing the ones who love of the any real way to make amends. Yes they can give happiness and love to the Allen that has no bad memories, but in the end, they never got to work with the past Allen to make amends and show through all their future actions that they wont break trust anymore. And its also, the Allen/Red we know through the story, thats not him who gets a happy life. Though the last line makes me think a lot of all this has been purposeful, since you call this ending bittersweet ;P

But yeah, how much puppy eye should I make to hope for maybe a little what if he kept his memories?

I finally got caught up with the story and now I'm left crying. Poor Allen going through hell and then choosing to start over again. Thank you for the brilliant journey and look forward to the bonus chapter.

I've seen this work because but hesitated to read it for years. Once I saw it was completed, I've finally been intrigued enough to open it. I can safely say that I did not regret it one bit.

I'm primarily a genfic reader, so I was enthusiastic that the story focused on the relationship between not only Allen and Tyki, but Allen and the other Noahs as well. Each moment in these interactions was deliberate, and the mending of their bonds was sweet yet realistic. You handled the romance between Allen and Tyki well, and I could understand why Tyki fell in love and gave up his revenge. I'm so very glad that we got a happy ending. Frankly, if I had one complaint, it is that I feel cheated that Red, the identity that had suffered so long did not get a happy ending. I understand his decision to give up his happiness for Allen, yet nevertheless I feel bittersweet at his choice to erase himself.

I'm very glad I gave this story a chance. Thank you for this beautiful story. I hope you will continue to write tales that tug at the heartstrings of readers for years to come.

...I have been hit with a train of feels.., that was beautiful. It broke my heart that Allen forgot and Kanda's letter broke it even more. This was very well written and the story was surprising, not many fanfictions have story lines so complex. You did an amazing job with this.

This story fucked up my emotions so bad, but I am honestly glad that I had stumbled upon this story. It's rare to find great stories like this one. I do not have the words to tell you how much I enjiyed this story.

This story is so good but so emotionally traumatizing i love it. This is probably one of the best fics I've ever read.

This is so insanely sweet and good and you have no idea how much I started crying :(((( 3