Omg, I think I'm crying! You're continuing! Thank you, thank you, thank you! Utter sweetheart you are!

So John's memory isn't quite coming back, more like his memories are getting jumbled up. Very interesting. I'm psyched to see how you'll do this. And how do Soulmates feature here? Aside from the connection?

Why is this still ongoing? I really want to finish this! Sounds good so far! Please continue this!

Ah yes, tea!

You are wonderful!

Intriguing...I wonder who the man was...

And you left us with a cliffie last chapter that you haven't addressed here! Grrrrrr!

Oh no!

Excellent!

Yeah...excuses excuses...Mind you, Sherlock seems happy enough...lol!

Nicely set up - poor John...

Marylou, this was a great response to the challenge! I'll make a tumblr post and let the peeps know this is here! I rrally enjoyed seeing what you came up with! Glad to help :)

I must admit, I can never resist a Mycroft fic.
I also can't resist circular stories, but now we are back to the sadness. Will John still feel anything now that he has lost his memory? Will Sherlock be the only one to remember their first kiss? how sad!

one point:
"Mycroft called in his own specialists in..."
Must say I loved it all.
Will there be more chapters of this adorable fic, or shall we sit perpetually beside John's bedside hoping beyond hope that this is temporary.

LOVED it! WOW! I'm hooked, please update sone more?!

I love the drama of this section, but you need to tighten the structure a bit.
"It was John TO step back from their fist kiss" should be
"It was John who stepped back from their first kiss,"
There should be a comma between "his friend" and " his love",
And a period after " he would return to it later.
Also
"John was quick to push him out of the blast was deafening" needs to be rephrased.
Always difficult to do and keep the number accurate, but I have faith that you can do it.

There are so many people who don't like Johnlock, but there's something really satisfying about it, isn't there?

This was just lovely.