Wow, just one review? You deserve a lot more than that.
I love your Tristian, even if he is noncanon - I think he makes a nice sideplot with Kenny and all. It's very good character development, as I've already got your character's personalities worked out. I'm anxious to see what happens with Creek, and some Trenny never hurt anyone (or existed but oh well)

I love feisty Tweek in the ring, you caught the actions pretty Welll. And giving him a mute little brother, different, and interesting to think of tweek as a caretaker for someone else and vice versa. Make sure when ur doing dialogue you put line breaks for ever new speaker