falconer doesn't fit. i would think gohan is the type who listens to the Yamamoto score.

This is a mess. It's a headache to read on many fronts, but interesting enough to tolerate the migraine. It's like someone took a literal gallon of psychedelics, yet somehow kept the wherewithal to keep notes of every drug induced thought, then when they eventual came down took those piles of notes and edited it into a story form. The fact that it's not the worst example of throwing random shit into a fanfiction is not because of any restraint shown in this story.

LMAO MY MAN KRILLIN HAD TO PUT IN WORK SO HER CLENCH WOULDN'T BREAK HIM

Wow, that was extremely uncomfortable to read.

Ugh, I hate how everybody in this fic speaks so properly. I'd never speak like these guys do while to my best friend.

jesus, this is about dbz and you type about hard nipples n stuff, you are strange

Honestly no one talks like this. They sound like robots

J'ai aimé.

Compared to Gohan, I think Videl had it more embarrassing talking about.. That.
Well, it is only natural that they would have questions.

Yeah, all this free talk about sex. Seems really taboo to me. As I said, not used to reading this type of story! Especially dbz one's! Dbz has always been simple, thankfully not 'as simple as a kiddy pool' like some people think. No, maybe the word I'm looking for is straightforward. The series has always been fun and straightforward. It has backstories and depth yes, but still so many questions one can easily speculate.

And u have done a very good job in going very deep into simple matters such as girls talking about their first time, giving advice, high school drama, etc. It's just wow..

Yeah, that thing between Gohan and his friends.. *whistles*
That is some deep crap. I always did wonder what happened to Erasa and Sharpener.. Did they stay friends with Gohan off screen or did they, for whatever reason, break off their small time friendship permanently?

Anyways, story is rather interesting and very different from what I'm used to reading. Still it's good.

Ok that 1st part with Gohan talking about the guilt and shame he has, gave me so many feels! I mean, arck Gohan noo! I just wanted to give him a big hug! Especially since he is my fave character!

And as for that last part. Yeah, ok. I don't think I wanted to know that Erasa... But it was sweet that she trusts and cares enough about Videl to confide in her and give her important advice to boot. Erasa really seems like a good friend :)

Yayy! I always did wonder how the hell Gohan coped with everyone at his school knowing he was the Great Saiyaman. I mean, in 6 months, Goku will ask Shenron to erase the Earthlings memories of Majin Buu. However, Buu doesn't show up till later after the tournmanet and obviously has nothing to do with Gohan.. So, I wonder if this means that everyone now and forever always knows Gohan's secret idenity.. Hmm..

Well, I like the idea of Videl helping Gohan through it. It makes sense, since she of all people would know how it feels afterall.

Interesting start. I always did think Videl crazy, but very heroic for helping out the police. I mean with life threatning situations like that, putting herself at risk. It's very admirable what she does. Especially considering she is no z fighter, in terms of strength at least. And beleive me, I know what it's like to have your life threatened by another person. I know how Videl feels in not thinking she would make it out alive! And I'm also around her age, 18!

Anyways, this fic looks interesting. Good start.

Wow amazing job on the conclusion of this story!