Reviews for Soul bonds: Control |
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![]() ![]() Please let the next chapter be up soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it |
![]() ![]() love! please update i need to keep reading! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I see this story hasn't been updated in a while...hopefully this will motivate you...? Could you make Ron be stubborn and obtuse at first, but understanding later in the story? And none of the instant love/kissing stuff with the soul bond, please and thank you. But I'm really enjoying this story, so PLEASE update soon! Thanks. Love, Kate |
![]() ![]() I thought you said the next chapter would be up soon? ;( hurt look |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not too bad, spelling and grammar and word flow all need improvement. |
![]() ![]() Sorry my computer messed up. I think an accepting Ron since he would prefer Ginny with Harry as apposed to any other bloke. He just wasn't happy when Harry broke up with her. I actually think he knew it wouldn't matter much about Harry since she was Weasely anyway. That alone makes her a target and I think Ron saw it and that's why he thought Harry was messing her around when he saw them kissing. I think a part of Ron thought he was lying about breaking up to protect her. |
![]() ![]() An accepting Ron. When it comes to Ginny he'd rather have Harry than s |
![]() ![]() ![]() This isn't a chapter. It's a paragraph. Longer, dude/dudette. Longer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg love it can't wait for next update |
![]() ![]() Overall this is a good story as I'm starting to get into it. My only concern for you is your spelling/grammar. For example it should read "losing precious Potter" not "loosing precious Potter". You made that mistake in other chapters as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() some bashing at first then accepting more fun that way have ron tell harry it's him or ginny and have harry pick ginny |
![]() ![]() May i ask why the entire hogwarts is helping Madam Pomfery. She can do it herself. she would have kicked everyone out (after taking necessary info). With so much yelling, patients will probably die, even if not in danger. I would advice u to rewrite this chapter, because it looks extremely silly. Treatments behind doors. when stable allow others in including that Aurror (Why is Kingsley here anyway) and the mother. And for your comment about Ron bashing. don't do that. it so common. everyone out to bash ron. if u really want to bash. Bash Hermione, that is uncommon. but my advise don't bash at all. Show characters fault (everyone has that) but no bash. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far! I'm leaning towards a bit of Ron bashing. |
![]() ![]() great chapter can't wait for the next one |