Reviews for Phantom Shots |
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![]() ![]() I found that kind of behavior odd from ember. Is she thinking of starting a relationship with him? Better DxE, than DxS. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude, poly yass, hey what if skukjer just pops in? XD but for real tho WORK ON THE NEXT CHAPTER! I'm working on the other thing ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter! you are amazing! awwwwww! i love when danny is not fighting other ghosts! i love this a lot! [the poly bomb has started] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting blind Danny shot. I was also surprised by him having absolutely no eyes (I was expecting glazed eyes) so I kinda felt as surprised as Wes. Although, I did feel as though Wes' tormenting was a bit over the top (not that people can't be that cruel, but it felt a tiny bit forced) It's a minor nitpick though. Thought it was cool! You're still taking requests, right? If so (and I'm right that you're also open to crossovers) I was wondering if you'd be willing to do a DP and Young Justice oneshot. But more specifically, I think it's interesting that Dick Grayson (the first Robin) has good memories of being in a circus (excluding the one bad memory of watching his parents die mid-performance). Ringmaster Haley was like a grandfather to him, the opposite is true for Danny. Freakshow is Danny's experience of a circus and that was less that fun and happy. I can't stop thinking of Freakshow and Haley interacting and somehow mixing Danny, Batman, and Dick Grayson in there. Just a thought. It's a plot bunny that's been bugging me, but I just didn't know how to write it. I keep thinking someone else might have an idea. Regardless, great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks poly, turn my favorite character into a pyscho killer why don't you? Haha nice tho, can't wait for your next update ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg! is finally here! this is amazing! i can feel the storm of angst, is coming! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice Poly! I can't wait for the destruction to occur in day 2! Much angst, and much love for this! Once again, can't wait to see what's in store. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES I LOVE IT |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter! you are amazing! **the angst is coming** |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, the beginning of the angst has already begun, and it's only day one. Oh, not so little Dan, you're going to get angsted up by baby talk. (shakes head) Great work, Poly! I can't wait to see the next parts for when the real angst fest starts! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why did you do this? Agh. Seriously, great job though and I am excited to see how the next bit goes C: |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter! you are amazing! i really liked how danny punched wes! hehehe |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'M CACKLING THIS IS WONDERFUL I think my favorite part is fighting over the cookies, I had to go back and read it a few times because it's just so funny! |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good I like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter! you are amazing! i love this! XD |