This chappy is really cute but plz tell me she ends up with Blood. I really ship them

I am enjoying this story so far keep up the writing and also thanks for the Fav&Follow I really don't have many readers so again thank you. I look forward to seeing more of tis story and how it develops, happy writing and the procrastination passes eventually (usually when you have time to and the ideas start flowing in.)

Hi, so far I like your story, and I like how are you writing, this is wierd, when I am reading this story a song called "deep sea girl" sung by Hatsune Miku, or shinkai shoujo (I think) in Japanese.
And keep it up!

Hmm, I wonder . . . Who is this traveler? Now a lot of ideas are popping up in my head as to who's who and what's what, but for now, I'll just calm myself down and wait for the next upload. :)

Alice is a little . . . temperamental in this, isn't she? Then again, isn't QuinRose's Alice also a little violent? You really meant it when you said that you were changing up the legend, didn't you? I'm interested in reading the direction you'll be taking this story in. Also, I'm getting a little excited just having to wait for the scene when Alice becomes the "Sea Goddess." Eep! x)

Anyways, I'm a little lazy to write any constructive criticism, but I will say that the chapter was easy to read and understanding-or for me it was, I'm not sure about other people. Anyways, thank you for the shout out in your author's note (although, technically, it isn't really a shout out), and don't we all get a lazy one time or another? Now, I'd say, "Keep up the good work!" But I find that it's not as helpful as we think it is, so for now, I'll just settle with: Keep on writing! *heart*

This seems interesting...please update soon!

It's so kind of you to include all the different versions of the legend. (I swear, I'm not being sarcastic!)

Now I'm really interested in learning what changes you made on the legend, obviously, your Sedna (Alice) isn't going to be an only child, and she won't be "a vain, young woman" since she stated in the previous chapter that she was "plain" compared to her older sister. Then again, she could always think that she's plain, ugly, dull, boring, etc. but everyone else can think that she's beautiful, and whatnot.

Oh, now I'm really interested to read her interactions with the role holders, considering she's a Sea Goddess now, and she holds a grudge against humanity (mostly her family, and her village-if in this version she lived in one) for what her people did to her. Are you going to elaborate more on her husband? Since, technically, they're still married? (He's a bastard though, for tricking Alice's parents into allowing/forcing Alice to marry him.) Now, this makes me wonder, are some of the role holders going to be sea creatures (like mermaids, ha ha), be Gods and/or Goddesses, or are they all going to be humans?

Okay, I'm going to end this here before I let my curiosity take over. :)

I read several of the legend before reading this so I'll know what to expect, and to see how much you've changed it, and so far, it's going great! I really want to know what happened before and during Alice drowned.

Ugh, I don't understand Lorina. She and Alice's fiance watched Alice drown, and they were sad about it, but they didn't do anything? And even though Lorina would refuse Alice's fiance's proposals to her (despite the fact that he was already engage with Alice, I'm guessing), Lorina still married him, had children with him, and they became one of those 'lovey-dovey' couples. *face-palm* Also, if Alice's fiance was after Lorina, then why did he became engaged to Alice? Whatever, Lorina can get Alice's sloppy seconds. ;) Sorry, I'm ranting right now, but that just annoyed me, even if they were "sad" and "suffered" when Alice drowned, but, uh, how did they suffer exactly?

Ha, ha, is it bad that I laughed when Alice stated that even though a small (dying) part of her didn't want anything bad to happen to her family, she would still give them hell for a year? Personally, by the way Lorina and Alice's fiance were acting, (and if it follows the original legend) another one of Alice's certain family member, then I think that they deserve the "hell" that Alice is putting them through.

My goodness, it's barely been the first chapter and you've already provoked so much emotions within me. Kudos! :) Keep up the good work.

Intense. I LIKE it. Please update soon.