I love this story! Somehow I feel like the build-up is a bit too fast? But that's perfectly fine with me, too! Happens with all teenagers :D Thanks for writing this story!

Although Ash and Dawn are the spotlight of the story, I can't help but say Avy's personality is also well written here. Kudos to you writers!

"I've learned that love and girls only bring you pain in the long run. So why put myself through the pain?"

Hey. Hey yeah that's actually true. I agree with that. Why go through that pain? Preach it brother! Preach it!

Ash literally sounds like me when it comes to relationships. The resemblance is uncanny

My favourite pairings are:
Ash x Dawn
Drew x May
Gary x Misty

awesome

Really leaf roller her eyes?

Can't wait for the sequel lol lol
Let me guess: dawn is going to become a famous singer/performer lol
I Dawn berlitz

I loved it a lot but I couldn't get onto the next chapter because it was restricted

I think it should be "zekrom university the sequel to give your heart a break''

I think hat it should be zekrom university the sequel to give my heart a break.

Absolutely love this story! The sequel still makes me angry to this day though...

Please rename chapter one "Heartbreak" q_q

great chapter love it I'll keep reading this and your next stories

you guys should work together more this was gr8

I kind of feel bad. This ending was sooooo goood but its sequeal was a kind of blow to pearlshipping. I wish they would realise how she had given his heart a break and not forget it while dancing with the world.