OMG why would you humiliate Darcy in front of Wickham I don't understand

i cant tell who is more idiotic: Darcy or elizabeth. This has turned into a farce.

Nice original story. I like the faster resolution in a wayI mean to stay on Darcy’s side. But of course Elisabeth was keeping us on our toes!
Thank you

Caroline has crossed all boundaries of manners in commenting on the girls clothing to their face. Rude witch

Beautiful story! Thanks for sharing your vision

Oh please...let them be happy for a change!

I'm pleased with Darcy not being the overly polite gentleman and calling Miss Linelove it) out over her actions and words. She's rude. How many times does Elizabeth have to tell her to NOT call her Eliza? Spiteful witch

Caroline is actually quite out there with her barbs instead of making them at home. It's not how the majority of the ton act in public. Lady Matlock will be horrified!

Well, this was an almost okay story.
I didn't like the amount of feelings the people in this story have. Seriously, why do these people love each other?
But I hate leaving a story unfinished. So I carried on. But Elizabeth running away was so stupid that I can't continue reading this fanfiction.

Good story.

When you choose to write a story in the first person, it makes no sense to change the POV.

Great story. Thanks for sharing.
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It has come to my attention that ... earlier this evening, Harry Potter was sighted in Hogsmeade

Sorry I had to do that hehe XDXDXDXD

I am reading this story for the second time now and I love it as much as the first

This seemed like quite a good story until it suddenly went very silly in this chapter. So silly that I have given up trying to read any more. It is a pity that it turned out this way as it started so well with a very interesting premise.

Nice story!