Reviews for Return of Saturn
Jill chapter 11 . 5/14/2019
Please return and finish this story. So many authors have updated their dormant stories this year. It would be nice to see the same done for this riveting fic.
Guest chapter 6 . 1/17/2016
Such strength in your writing. Love it. Thanks
Guest chapter 11 . 9/7/2015
Hiya, I am so happy you are continuing this fanfic. I missed it and wondered when you were going to go back. It was so original. Please update soon and thank you for the reminder in the beginning. It's funny b/c I was just thinking About this story and wAs so happy when I saw it as updated. Great work. ;)
Ttracee chapter 11 . 9/5/2015
This last chapter was pretty good. I see you are going to prolong the telling of the half soul and Abbie being in agony when she is touched bu someone she loves. Just don't drag it on - I always get bored when authors do that.
Abbie's Feet chapter 11 . 8/28/2015
I hope Abbie doesn't waste a lot of time keeping this secret. That would be so cliche. I think if Katrina gets near her though she will be able to detect something is wrong. I'm saddened how awful Crane is to her here. I hope she finds happiness. Jenny should also know something is wrong. No one just returns from Purgatory without something profoundly being wrong.
Llama the Queen chapter 11 . 8/27/2015
How terrible that the trio get to go through that. If Katrina were to realise what's happening, she'd probably try to take over and poison him away from Abbie (which obviously won't work, duh Katrina). But I'm kind of hoping that she will be the bigger person and try to help Abbie fix herself. If not, I know Ichabod and Jenny will move mountains to help her feel the positive things again. I'm also wishing that being around him will trigger her to start feeling gradually (it'll be like feeding off her piece of soul inside him), until she has her piece back. Or something.
HORSMANOFWAR chapter 4 . 4/21/2015
OK I JUST WANT TO SAY THAT I STARTED READING THIS BEFORE I WENT TO SCHOOL AND GOT TO THE THIRD CHAPET AND THE WHOLE DAY IT HAS DISTRACTED ME JUST THINKING ABOUT ICHABOD SAYING WHAT HAVE YOU DONE AND SO WHEN I FINALLY GOT THE CHANCE TOP CONTINUE READING IT WAS AWESOME AND I JUST WANNA THANK YOU FOR THAT LINE '' I DID NOT JOURNEY HERE TO RESCUE MY SOUL MATE. SHE CAME HERE WITH ME '' BECAUSE THAT IS JUST AMAZING
uneange1 chapter 4 . 4/18/2015
What the hell? My heart... I have actual tears in my eyes. Great job. This is written beautifully.
Ttracee chapter 10 . 2/26/2015
OMG - I do not know what I was doing when you downloaded chapter 9 but that was really good. I knew Moloch released her in chapter 8 but I had to play catch up. Now here we are in chapter 10 and I had to read some of it twice it was so good. I am like really worried how Abbie is going to be or act towards Jenny and Ichobod. She should be closer to him giving he has the other half of her inside him. I cannot wait.
Llama the Queen chapter 10 . 2/25/2015
Poor Katrina, I wonder what will happen to he now. BUT over to more important things, is Abbie awake? Because if she is, I'm afraid of the next chapter. What if she's just indifferent to him? I can imagine all the ways his heart will crush at the realisation.
Llama the Queen chapter 9 . 2/25/2015
YES! My being patient has been rewarded! I'm so glad this is back. I'm so worried for Abbie though...is she able to heal like a complete human, and oh my gosh, her feelings...will she feel at all? Why oh why is this fic so awesome?
Abbie's Feet chapter 9 . 2/24/2015
Great update. I'm just getting back into fic reading. This has been a tough season.
Ttracee chapter 8 . 1/8/2015
This was actually pretty good - but Moloch is full of it. She still has 1/2 her soul and the person she loves has the other part. She will be just fine. It is mind over matter - the brain fighting with the heart. If she believes him then so will her heart but the heart have a way of going against the brain?
Jolo815 chapter 8 . 1/10/2015
I can not wait for the update!i hope you update soon. I can't wait to read what happens? Great writing! Very heartfelt and heart breaking! I have a question does Abbie coming back into reality erases icahabod's love for her? Or is she the one who doesn't love him?
Abbie's Feet chapter 6 . 1/10/2015
Ok, I'm caught up. Thank you to those who helped me out, including the author. I'm happy to see this fic updated. It was indeed one of my favorites. I look forward to seeing what happens when Abbie returns to her family. And as always, Andy just makes me cry. Fic writers has written him better than the show writers ever could have. He's the forgotten gem of this show.
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