Fantastic. As usual, woman is a fool: she was violated repeatedly and after some hijinks (which counts as payback), she comes to conclusion all that was expression of COURTING variation, plus some "fabulous" sex (inevitably), and - voila! Everything is fine and dandy, "they lived happily ever after". And this fic had such potential for revenge and putting bastards in their places; all of them.

That dance is utterly beautiful!

Oh, the music...poor bastards...

Nope! This needs an epilogue! I need... more. They had their sex and it was great and now I need to know that Hermione is happy and content with the game they played and the way they, essentially, violated her privacy. I need that conversation and I also want to know when she first tells them she loves them. So. Keep going. Cause I need more.

I just came across your story and I freaking love it. It's now one of my favorites. It's really a one of a kind and I love the twists and suspense. And you write some juicy scenes.

I have never even listened to the words to that song before, even though I've heard it a thousand times! I'll never be able to unhear it now! Loved this chapter!

love it! Will you really make a sequel? I really liked the way you portrayed these 3. And the plot! great history.

Hot!

This was amazing! I love the 3 of them together! Thank you for this lovely story. I'm looking forward to more from you. Oh and chapter 2 had me crying from laughter!

I was fully expecting pure Adult Action *ahem* with a whisper of a plot, but this surprised me with a really gritty plot, topped off with some sexy conclusions. I wish there was a bit more at the end showing a bit more of Severus/Hermione/Lucius settling into their new romance.

the movie is ever after. honestly one of my favorite renditions of "Cinderella" and i know its obviously to late for house points but im a Hufflepuff

oh hel lno!
no , no, no NO!
you cannot let her just live and let live
she didnt punish those assholes.
NO!
i was so looking forward to revenge from her
they deserve that shit. She was violated
it may be normal for them since they have lived in the magical world longer but she hasnt
she wasnt brought up like the other slytherin purebloods
she deserves to hurt them
she was flayed open and exposed to them and the bastard
she is too damn nice!
hermione deserves so many accolades for all she has done and yet she doesnt seek them
you would think she would have hardened her resolve
I am so mad with this ending. i wish there was more where after this she leaves them and . . . i dont know , she just hurts them
man i must have something wrong with me but i just feel so cheated by this ending.
she was vital to the war and to the people afterward
lucius and severus owe her EVERYTHING
literally, she remade them
all those snakes owe her
but does she do something no. and look at where it left her
almost a squib by a new adolf hitler.
up until when she began to forgive them i LOVED this story
the safety dance torture was epic
either than the ending you did wonderfully

All I can say is what a jerk.

I read this all in one sitting. I loved the plot, depth and hotness all rolled into one. I can tell you did your research! Brava!

I simply adore your use of "Some Like It Hot" and "My Fair Lady" in this fic! Severus and Lucius are completely adorable and lovable.