Fantastic story! Thank you so much. I was hooked.

Please, please write a sequel

Please finish the story I beg of you... it’s such a beautiful story and so well written, really heartbroken to see it just stuck here... :’(

Please finish this. Very enjoyable reading.

Oooooooo I can practically FEEL a sequel! "Toby: The Goblin Lord" please please please finish this story,and make a companion piece where Toby reads Sarah's book and does understand that it was about them and works to find a way back to the under world to reunite himself with his sister: the Goblin Queen! This story has been sssssssoooooooooooo good and very well written,I'll cry if you don't finish it

Luv ur story! Keep writing!

Any chance you will give us an update soon?

I hope you haven't concluded writing! This story is absolutely brilliant. Please don't quit writing just yet! D

I can't say properly how wonderful of a story this is because it's very truly brilliant. You've made the characters so believably real, what they're feeling and thinking understandable and the way you describe it is so beautiful. I don't usually leave reviews but had to on this occasion because your work is wonderful. I look forward to reading more! :)

I loge this story so very much. One of my favs!

you are killing me! I'm so engrossed in this story its becoming unhealthy haha! Its a roller coaster that I can't bear and yet can't tear myself away from! I can't believe I'm up to date and now have to wait for more! I hope it doesn't take to long and please god let them get their happy ending its breaking my heart! haha. Fabulous writing, thank you!

AAHHH THIS IS AMAZING! This has to be my favorite story I've ever read. PLEASE continue writing! This is a work of art :D

OMG THIS IS AMAZING I LOVE IT SO MUCH AAAAAHH

Please keep writing! This is great!

I was just thinking about this story and here was an update. Splendid job.. Great emotion.. I literally feel the heartache over here... But definitely fear how Sarah will take all the truth in once she finds out. My heart goes out to them both. Until next update!

Good story. Spent the last two days reading the whole thing. They have certainly gotten themselves into a pickle.