Reviews for Retribution
thefallen0000 chapter 5 . 3/20
i'm dissapointed in you harry
JolteonGirl chapter 7 . 2/5
Ignore those guests, you're doing great. They just haven't picked up on the fact that authors aren't obligated to cater to them.
Guest chapter 8 . 9/25/2018
Y u no update
QuestionablyCapableGhoul chapter 8 . 2/17/2017
I'm dead. I was so excited for the Elric brothers at Hogwarts; taking chances, making mistakes, getting messy. (Merlin, why is that quote so appropriate for those two?) What a cliffhanger. :(
That aside, lovely story! I like how they're separated at the beginning, and Ed's kitchen mishaps are hilarious.
dontaskk chapter 8 . 1/12/2017
this is dead isnt it? its so dead
Guest chapter 8 . 9/17/2016
Just saying, in England we say 'holiday' not 'vacation'
lurkingMe chapter 6 . 2/7/2016
Argh! My heart is beating like crazy! It's amazing how you put Ed and Al in the wizarding world and it's refreshing to see a hpxfma fic that has Al kicking serious asses. It amazing! Honestly I like Ed a little bit more than Al but damn, Al deserve his moments.
Is it just me or Ed's arm is healing a bit slow compared to Al? Maybe he didnt get them magic steroid as much as Al? But once again, the fight with the death eaters was terrific! My heart was in my throat the whole time. I don't know why I got so giddy, maybe finally seeing Al on the spotlight made feel like a proung momma.
Great great story. I really hope you continue this cause I only have 2 more chapters to read.
Guest chapter 8 . 2/6/2016
Completely bloody awesome. No other comment.
Addie Lover of Stories chapter 8 . 8/7/2015
I'm really enjoying your story so far! Thank you for writing it, I can't wait to read more! XD
Ib-chan chapter 8 . 6/26/2015
Haha Edward cracks me up. "Blow it out your ass." I CAN'T xDD
Update soon!
Ib-chan chapter 6 . 6/26/2015
ASDSTOROOIJAWEOIJ THIS CHAPTER WAS AWESOME! I'm just banging my head against the wall due to suspense and angst like

REUNITE GODDAMMIT REUNITEEEEEE *flips table*
hello chapter 8 . 5/14/2015
ron is an asshole
al is amazing
nuff said
great story tho
Guest chapter 8 . 4/16/2015
Please update soon!
TragedyInBlack chapter 8 . 4/1/2015
My thoughts are that you need to update this fanfiction! PLZ!
Ultrawolfie chapter 8 . 3/26/2015
Normally I hate crossovers since they usually feel so forced and out of place but this one flows so naturally that I can really picture all of this happening. I also adore the fact that you're prioritising Al, I mean I love Ed too but there's already an abundance of him in fanfiction, and Al is my fave too. It's always nice to read stuff about him in his real body since that also feels so refreshing. Also love the originality of putting him in Ravenclaw since I was convinced he'd be in Gryffindor. Hope he still gets lots of time to hang out with Harry and co. Love the jealous Ron for a extra twist. I nearly sobbed when I realized this story was last updated 8 months ago... But I'll just fave this so I'll immediately know if you get motivated for this story again. Keep up the excellent work, there can never be enough outstanding fullmetal alchemist fanfiction in this world. Ps I actually found this story by following your name in a review when I saw that you were a big Al fan haha.

Ultrawolfie out!
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