Yo what up Dutch amigo. Guess who is looking at dissss.

WHY HAVE YOU GONE1 Sorry, I am just disappointed. Take your time to get back in the groove of writing.

Third POV
The look of delight flashed across her face as the fact that one of her Favourite fanfictions had been updated. Enthusiastically, she immediately clicked on the link and resumed reading the amazingly written story after a Long time. She didn't blame the author, it wasn't like she hadn't been slacking too. Heck, she even felt lazy to continue her OWN fan-fiction. But instead of that odd satisfaction she had always felt after reading a chapter, her hope...broke.

In the Beginning, she had thought that surely there will be a continuation but it'll take a mighty Long time. But at least there would be one. But as you know, her mind just shrugged,"Never fucking mind then."

She, herself, feels depressed as to the ending of this story. She excepted it to be at least 80 chapters for the-said fanfiction. She liked the flow of the author's writing and how the author easily made her imagine the sceneries of the environment in the plot. But... good things will always come to an end. #bored XD

Sad to see this end. Honestly my absolute favorite fanfic of all time. I do agree with some of your points, but I have to say, practice makes perfect am I right? So, now that you know what you did "wrong" and what you want to improve upon, try re-writing this. Start over, outline what you want to write and start this over. I know for a fact, that everyone who followed, favorited, and commented their support for you in the past will support you again. You have a ton of talent and it takes skill to write in a language that is not your native language. This story, with all the "flaws" has the most potential I've ever seen. I hope that you will pick up this story and work with it because this has the potential of being a actual book one day perhaps. You are a very well spoken person and I hope whatever you choose to do, you do something that makes you happy. We all support your decision whatever that may be. Hope you write something cool like this sometime soon. Hope your holidays were good. Adios for now~

Awwwww.. Elsohn may be cute but can I please have Jelsa? Maybe John goes to the dumbass war and he dies while trying to protect his teammates - sadly -. Then when Elsa knows she break down and when the news reached the ears of Jack - since Rapunzel is Elsa's cousin - he comes to comfort him and then when Jack graduate, he ask Elsa out? And then you can continue the story...
I really love this story, it's amazing and you're awamzing too.. Can't wait for the next update! So excited!

I hope the story will be like this: Elsa & John gets engaged but before their marriage, John has to go to the son sick war again -sadly- and he dies-sobs-. And that's when Jack comes into her life & tadaa! JELSA

Will jack ever get his chance with elsa.?

I liked how you use to write WAY more. I couldn't even get through this chapter. Please rewrite it like you use to write. This chapter I feel could have been something great. Your english was fine, I saw nothing wrong with how you wrote. PLEASE I beg of you! Rewrite this to how you use to write. I love this story and I would hate to have to stop reading it now because you wrote it in a more digressed way - to the point where it pained me to read a sentence. I don't mean to be hurtful. i'm just saying your writing was good how it was and it didn't need to change.

More please!

pretty good chapter it's nice to see you back at writing this story, hopefully it will make my interest in those fandoms pick up again(damn you to aru majutsu no index and it's fandom for making me ignoring ignore jelsa greatness for about 3 months lol) elsa and john sure have a strong bond but i'm curious in how will you make them break up,guess i'll have to wait hehe keep it up

Good chapter. Nice to see you are continuing it. Hope to see the end of John and Elsa's relationship soon. If possible without Elsa grieving. Go Jelsa!

Ah I love this story so kept me hooked for two days until i finished was worth it, because i enjoyed the feels it gave me.
Also Wishing for an update :3
Bye!

me tooo! Cant wait for it

This is really good ughhhh can't wait for jelsa to happen

This definitely isn't like any other Jelsa story I've read. But I like it. Keep going. Patience indeed.