So Dagur is Piter? Interesting. I wonder how he'll die.

Yep. This guy has definitely read Dune. The branches within branches... the good always suffer more than the evil, but the rewards are always greater... Do not shed your water over me... perils of violence and uncertainty... an abomination... one does not realize true fear until they behold it...

Awesome!

This has the lovely fragrance of Frank Herbert all over it.

Prescience? I wonder if this guy has read Dune. Anyone else ever read a story on this site that used the word prescience outside of the Dune fandom? Unlikely.

this was good until you added the whole hiccup will save the world prophecy

The pacing is really slow in my opinion.
So to make quote, "Do you some exposition?~"

I don't know how to feel about the change of dragons and minor characters.

So, how will Stoick react to this.

I'm just imagining Hiccup in his HTTYD 2 suit.

I hope he makes his flight suit later.

Interesting start!

Short? This is definitely not short

Night Furies!

I post another chapter in "Jedi Academy" if you want to see

Long, short, I like chapters. (OK, I prefer long chapters, but you should do what feels right for your story!)

Poor Hiccup...sooner or later, he's going to learn that, sometimes, you can't afford to give every enemy a chance...

I doubt your even still around to read this but if you are, please let us know. Im not requesting you to continue writing but i believe your fans atleast have the right to know if you will ever continue your work. The idea behind this story is truly magnificent and it seems such a waste to throw it away. Ive fallen in love with the universe youve created and it pains us all to see it end this way.