Reviews for Dark Dawn Revolution
IndigoBlueButterfly chapter 11 . 2/12/2019
Ngl I bitch may have cried multiple times while reading this. I still can't get over Camio being dead.

This was so well written and good, I would have bought this as a book, I want this bound like a hardcover. I stan (*︶*)
eduardo chapter 11 . 9/18/2017
is beautiful thank you very much if you did another fic of them a dantalliam I love it and love your story sorry if there are flaws in my writing but English is not my mother tongue
tav1sh chapter 11 . 8/25/2015
i just read this whole thing in one go and it was incredible. i loved pretty much everything about this story, your writing style and characterization were perfect and the plot was so much more interesting then in the anime. good job!
sirdunksalot chapter 11 . 1/28/2015
I liked this fic a lot, your prose is good, and this fandom deserves a lot more attention.

Given it's based on the anime, I think you did a great job, and made the ending a whole lot more interesting than the show was. I liked your take on the different characters, and whatnot.

That said, the anime was pretty awful, and it's a shame you didn't write something based on the manga. The anime was one of those pretty poorly produced mish-mashes of made up fillers and crap that diverted from the far superior manga, and mostly just served as an advertisement for the series.

The manga explores a lot more about the characters that you don't seem to connect well with or like as much, and if you haven't read it yet, I'd advise you give it a shot. The anime simply didn't do it justice, but nevertheless, this was a very worthwhile read. Hopefully you'll do more on the series in the future.
NinjaSheik chapter 11 . 9/2/2014
CONGRATULATIONS ON FINISHING THE STORY! :D

It was a great run, and I'm happy with how it ended (although I am still upset about Camio! T _ T)! It's a good ending for William and Dantalion!
Hana13 chapter 11 . 9/2/2014
The final chapter! William and Dantalion reunites and happy ending for the both of them! :)
Hana13 chapter 10 . 8/28/2014
Yay! Happy ending for everybody! The war is over and everybody is safe and sound. And Dantalion is the king now! :) One more chapter to go!
NinjaSheik chapter 10 . 8/28/2014
AWESOME CHAPTER! :D DANTALION IS THE NOW THE KING, AND THE REVOLUATION IS OVER!

Sytry is okay, too, and Dantalion kissed William! Kyaa! :D

One more chapter to go, eh? Please update soon, then! :)
NinjaSheik chapter 9 . 8/25/2014
YAY! SYTRY LIVES! YAY! :D NOW PLEASE BRING CAMIO BACK, TOO! ;)

GRR! MICHAEL! :( Saying those awful things to William... Unforgivable!

KEVIN! YOU'RE BACK! :D It's been a while since he appeared! I can't wait to see what happens next!

UPDATE SOON! :)
Hana13 chapter 9 . 8/25/2014
SRTRY! He's alive! I'm happy! :) And Kevin finally shows after who's knows long! Well, better late than never, I guess.

Update soon! :)
NinjaSheik chapter 8 . 8/21/2014
O _ O

WHAT. THE. HECK?! FIRST CAMIO, AND NOW SYTRY?! ARE YOU KIDDING ME?! NO! REFUSE TO ACCEPT THIS! YOU CAN'T KILL EVERYONE OFF LIKE THIS! IT'S NOT RIGHT! CAMIO! SYTRY! T _ T NO!

But, seriously, what the heck? :( Are you planning to kill everyone off so Dantalion and William can be together? I won't like the idea if either of those two die as well. And Sytry never even got to confess his love for William! And he just figured it out, too! And there's Camio, to boot! Waah! T _ T

Update soon! :)
Akuma Inoue chapter 8 . 8/21/2014
Dear CrimsonStarbird-sama,
I absolutely adore your story: "Dark Dawn Revolution". I'm hoping for more hearbreaking but amazing chapters! Keep up the awestrucking work!
- Love Akuma Inoue
Hana13 chapter 8 . 8/21/2014
SYTRY! T-T First Camio, now Sytry! T-T Now only Dantalion is left, I hope he can really save Hell and William...
Hana13 chapter 7 . 8/17/2014
AWWW! Poor demons! T-T I wonder if William was right forcefully sending back there...Dantalion and Sytry should have been in Hell, but sendig them away like will affect their state of mine...
NinjaSheik chapter 7 . 8/17/2014
WILLIAM! NO! T _ T

Sytry and Dantalion is so heartbroken now! What's going to happen now between them?!

UPDATE SOON! :)
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