cuz im a wuss i hope the penalty game isnt actually horrifying

So, was that really Yami?
This was interesting but the question remains: Was that Yami?

Bravo! Nice twist on the "Atem returns from the Afterlife." Loved your vivid descriptions of Yuugi's thoughts, reactions, and emotions. Spot on characterization imo. I may or may not have gasped audibly when the spirit tore Black Magician in half... Anyway, a job well done! Hope you write more in the future as inspiration strikes! I'll certainly be on the lookout for more of your works :)

Is there a sequel

I've always wanted to read a story to see how Yugi and his friends (and maybe even Yami/Atem) would react to season zero Yami. I just always thought that his character was so different from Yami/Atem, that they could almost pass as two different people, almost. I find it facinating that season zero Yami didn't have any memories, and so he just thought of himself as an extention of Yugi, like it never occured to him that he just apeared there one night after Yugi finished the puzzle. His character really was amazing, what whith his single-minded determanation to protect Yugi, or himself, as he thought at the time. Anyway, enought of my mini-rant, I loved. The story, and yes, you are cruel by ending it like that. Jerk.

Love the dark theme, and the mystery you have added. Would have been wonderful if you had continued it in any way, and not just the lemon. This could have made for one hell of a plot.

Ohlala...I was scared at first because he was being freaky then I was worried...then I was getting tissues or my nose bleed, then I was like "Oh come on!" Cause it ended X3 I loved it, really nice. Have an Icy Day!

-IcexIcuo (Ganbatte!)

Ooh I really liked this! My favorite part was the fact the spirit said so little. Really added a lot of suspense/mystery as to what was going on. And having Yuugi initiate contact was interesting and worked well in this situation. Excellent work!

Hehehe, I can see what the penalty game is! Although Im not sure who would top and who would bottom, since Yugi was a lot more dominating. Looking forward to more!

Please update soon :-)