Come on guys! YOU GOT THIS! If theres alot left in this story then keep going!

PLEASE UPDATE! THIS IS SO GOOD! I wanna put something I wanna see in the story in this, can blake be in a secret government slave organization or something because I feel that the place north in which she is from is a secret prizon or something. secret because yang didnt really know about anything of the faunus and blake said her "home" was surrounded by fences. oh and another thing, please establish weather or not grimm is in this story and as blake said, KEEP GOING!

YOU'RE ALIVE! WOO!

Also, what was the obstacle that made the team ditch the car. It's not exactly clear.

It's been quite a while since you've updated this, so I'm not expecting anymore. But, what you have so far is amazing. The way your words flow, the easy to follow dialog, and the raw emotional intensity makes this story amazing. Even though I'd give up a couple of fingers to read the rest, I do not regret reading it.

Me again, just wanted to point something out that may - MAY - be a problem. On the summary for the fic, you set up relationships as Whiterose and Bumblebee. But so far, it's Ruby and Blake that seem to be making a strong emotional connection, what with Ruby saving Blake's life and Blake helping Ruby through her trauma. Their relationships with Weiss and Yang, however, don't have much of a foundation - in terms of romance, anyway.
Now, since Ladybug's my OTP, I have no problem with this, but if you don't want that, we'll need to see some Ruby/Weiss and Blake/Yang super-feelings-together scenes like what we've seen in chapter 7.
Looking forward to chapter 8, whatever you do.

Responding to your AN in chapter 6: considering you're competing against over 6.7 thousand other fics, I'd consider it an accomplishment to get the views, follows, and favs you have.
Anyway, I like the direction you're taking with the series; it's looking more like four kids (or maybe just three kids, depending on your view) who're on their own in a savage new world, though I hope the 'friendship moments' don't fall to the wayside. I really liked Yang, Ruby, and Weiss's strategy to keep their spirits up, and I'd hate for the characters to lose that optimism even with chapter 7's revelations.

Dayum, I wonder what Blake has been through if she could stay so calm at the sight. And if it wasn't White Fang, who was it? Awesome chapter though!

Please continue this! I found it yesterday and I'm really enjoying it, it's very well written!

Holy crap this is on FF?! Huh, I thought it was only on AO3. Oh well! Time to read.

FINALLY. Thank the lord and all that is holy for this chapter to finally be posted. Like damn, I love this fic so much and I nearly forgot about it. This should tell you something! You better get the next chapter up before I really DO forget! Then again my love this story will never waver, no matter how long the hiatus may be.

good chapter.

Heya Horror, nice seeing you there! Thanks for the wonderful schadenfreude! :D

Seriously, though, non-teenage angst psychological trauma (and subsequent character development) is almost nonexistent in most fics, or so fleeting and insignificant that they may as well not exist at all, which is really a shame. (Well, IMO, since I really love those).
As you've noticed yourself, Chapter 1-5 were more Adv/Friendship, with little specks of H/Comf than Horror; nice to see her finally show up. (Will she stay, though? Or is this an one time event? I wonder).
Good job on the chapter length and typographic quality! :D

Update please ! This fic is really good !

So far its pretty awesome. Can't wait to read more

I'm really curious to know what exactly happened.
Is the lack of bodies, even with all the destruction a plot point?
One thing that bothered me was the constantly shifting POV, it can be a little confusing sometimes.