I'm guessing our dream guest is possibly Obiwan, Yoda, Anakin, or Luke. Though the person cloning dinosaurs is most likely a Dark Jedi or Sith, most likely an OC one. I hope you update soon until then, may the Force be with you.

I believe the figure in Jake's dreams is either Yoda or Obi Wan. The figure cloning the dinosaurs, however I can't give a guess.

Everything seems fine so far. Good chapter.

Short but good. I'm interesting as to how it goes from here.

Obi-Ben said it.

I don't think Jurassic Wars sounds cheesy at all.

You are doing good so far with your writing. I'm interested to see what you are gonna do in this story. Keep going and hopefully I'll see if it improves even more.

Nice use of Star Wars Episode IV a New Hope.

It's so intense!

Very tense chapter! You described the fight very well!

I gotta say, I was a little worried when I first saw this was a Star Wars/Jurrasic Park Crossover. But it actually turned out pretty well. My only complaint is that there's nothing in your action scenes to piece it out, but that's my personal opinion. A bit of onomatopia will help that. But it's still good, nonetheless. :D

Cool chapter again :)

The way you're telling the story makes it feel as if star wars and jurassic park were always meant to have a cross over. Nice work!
Can't wait to see you're next chapter!

BELIEVE THAT
Dude that chapter was my answer I was looking for that. I can enjoy it more more and more