WOW! Frankie is an forgetful person...I know it's funny but come on...YOU HAD ONE JOB FRANKIE! ONE FLIPPING JOB! Love it though! Also I feel like it could be an good idea to change them? I'm not sure but good chapter nonetheless!

Well I'm shocked...this is NOTHING like the game...THIS IS GENIUS! I wanted do it like this...too bad though...stupid VIP

I like it! Good start. I was in the virtual world but quit after they directed me to an VIP building! What the flip? Hope it's an good story!

Hit me right in the heart!

This fanfiction is the best I have seen for the JumpStart fandom. I myself used to play JumpStart a lot as a kid, but for some reason now, my computer won’t let me and I’m almost thirteen. Maddy is just so likeable and so is her enthusiastic friend Grace. Maddy reminds me of myself at her age.

She feels like a real three year old struggling to let go of home and fit in. But it’s been over three years since you updated :(

Well, this is a dark twist on JumpStart. This has to be continued.

Wow. A slightly disturbing deconstruction of a children's educational MMO. I never thought I'd read such a thing. I'm amazed, amused, horrified, weirded out, and pleased all at the same time.