the moment i saw russian agent i was like natasha...and then boom great minds... this is nice it rare to find a HPXncis crossover that isnt slash femharry or just short...so bravo

Honestly, it's disappointing that this looks like it's been abandoned. I'm really liking what you've had going on with this story. I hope that you decide to change your mind and come back to this.

Hold magic as supplementary to mundane that way he doesn't forget oh doors locked and we can't barge in without a warrant? Alohamora oh look the door was open this whole time

Please Update, it’s a great story and would love to see it continued.

I really have been enjoying your story. I hope that once real life gives you time you could finish. I'd love to see how you want it to end! Very intriguing and fun!

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Please update ASAP mate. Its an amazing fanfic!

Harry, don't tease introverts..

I don't know if someone already told you but
" He had to admit, she definitely had a certain... Je nais se quoi about her."
is wrong. It's "certain... Je ne sais quoi about her."
Right.
This being said, I like the story so far. It's pretty good!

I hope you pick this up again somedY. I was enjoying it immensely.

Hello there! I really like this story, but I admit I'm not yet finished reading it. However, on Chapter 7, the information you stated regarding the codename of the Director of MI6 are all true, which is of course, as expected from a writer.

You clearly did a lot of research in writing this, as not a lot of people know about this information. I admit that the only reason I knew about it is because there was a book about espionage managements in my school library that I read once in curiosity.

So to summarize, good job on making sure that the information are correct and the nice way you write the story!

I'm not bagging on this story, in fact I love it, but he doesn't need anything in the NCIS armory. He can take his targets out without them.

Fuck me dude. It’s obvious that this story is abandoned and I really wish it weren’t. Well, if you do decide to come back one day, I’d like to see you incorporate Natasha into the fic and not just have her as some sort of ‘cameo’. Anyway, I hope to see you again one day. Goodbye for now.

Haha! I caught that subtle Avengers reference. Great story so far.

A good story so far and I really hope you continue writing it.

There is one issue... the firearm choice, especially in Palestine. First, a Sig is not a gun that I would choose for hard duty... the mechanism is great, but too complex and over engineered for really hard duty where there are no spare parts and your life relies on it. I can imagine them being used, however (every government contracting process includes a certain amount of graft).

The real issue is caliber, the Sig 357 is a round that would identify the user as someone from the west... it's relatively new, and you can't resupply ammo (I'd be willing to bet it would be easier to get .455 Webley in the Middle East than this round just because there are probably some weapons left over from the two world wars and the British Empire).

Very good story other than this small issue, thanks for writing.