This was great, very in character.

I really enjoyed reading this, it was fluffy and a good measure, especially with the realization Kyoko had that she was important to him.

Lory and you are right, she is the only one that Ren lets get truly close to him, even Yashiro has only come closer after she entered his life

it was a really nice story ! i enjoyed reading it ! thank you

THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!

i like this story !

I did like it - I'm only disappointed it wasn't longer! I think it was very ic, for everyone. Ending was sweet.

Awesome and sweet. Thank you for sharing! ~A.

That is ADORABLE!

*cries* this was so great and heartfelt and omg, I'm in so much love. I just want to sit here and contemplate life and ughhhh. So adorable. I love.

Aww that was adorable. Loved it. :)

Very cute. So close, on the first name mean. If Kyoko wasn't so determined to keep things professional with the man she loves, it wouldn't be that hard for him to show affection for her. It really is a funny pickle. So, this is Post-Guam reunion with Corn? If so, that would make a lot of sense.
Off to chapter 6. As always, thanks for posting.

-Kittyhawk09

Okay, so he won't reveal himself yet. It was interesting to hear his perspective of what Kyoko complained to the president about. My favorite scene was the phone call and when he realized he was "haunting" the door. Ha! Fort Knox. So, she made her discomfort very noticeable. That scene would be so fun animated or in manga form. I can see Kyoko running at Super Speed with Ren/Kuon looking like BJ as a dumbfounded chibi. Ah, so cute. I'm looking forward to the conclusion chapter.
Please PM me with your thoughts. What were you thinking about when you wrote this chapter?
Now, off to chapter 5.
-KH09

I'm surprised Kyoko didn't react to when Lory said other persona, but I guess it's not a regular occurrence to assume that someone has an alternate identity. I did chuckle over Kyoko's comment about having her bike hit before and Lory's reaction to that. In many thing Kyoko remains unique. Now, the question is before the "Heels rise again tomorrow morning" will Kuon slip out enough to reveal himself or will he remain his Ren-ess before the evening ends. Thanks for posting. I'm enjoying this a lot so far. Oh, I also really like how you showed the difference between Kyoko and Setsu by giving them both different reactions and desires in the same extreme heat.

-Kittyhawk09

This is so... DX I wanna cry! So good! I love it! Dunno if its over or not but if not update! If so, I love it!

Beautiful. Perfection itself in characterization. I wish this had continued so that I could see how you would handle the moment Ren tells her his past and their eventual admissions of love for one another. Thank you so much, author-sama.