I loved how you wrote Bela.
The whole story was a treat. Thank you. I know it was written five years ago, but I hope you go back to it!

Well done. It works for now, as a way to get the two together and also as an ending to this particular story. Nicely done. You write the characters well, and it works.

The cat's name! So perfectly Bela. Also the story is pretty great too ;)

I'm back again! I've been in a Supernatural rut recently, specifically Bela & Dean, and I ALWAYS come back to this. It's original, full of snark, and so painfully adorable; it's perfect every time. Seriously, this is the 8th or 9th time I've read it and something about it draws me in and warms my heart every time. Your characterization, especially the way you humanized Bela, is just flawless and the dramatic moments never felt overworked. The pacing was good, the ending, while too short, was just right, and I have a feeling I'll be back before long to enjoy it all over again. Keep up the great work :)

In thw words of Dean Winchester "Awsome."

This story is awsome. This is my second time reading this and it's awsome. I wish more people wrote Dean and Bela fanfictions.

OH GOSH, I LOVED THE ENDING THO. I love how they were all domestic and sweet and their reunion so quiet but so important. His "I found a way" shot me in the gut, I LOVE IT.

Really, really great fic. I thoroughly enjoyed how it developed from beginning to end. I think the way Dean and Bela developed was well done and natural, and intertwined with the whole saving Sam storyline nicely, while also having the sideplot of Bela's past coming back to haunt her. Really nice work!

(And since I'm slowly seeking out all available Dean/Bela fic on here, I'm sure I'll be coming around to leave reviews on your other D/B fics too. :D)

GUHHHH. I love the feelings at the end of this chapter. It hurts so good.

Ah-ha, I knew that rabbit's foot/hitman/Luke thing wasn't over...!

Oh OUCH. I love this - Bela doesn't do love and attachments, so the one and only time she lets herself go and give in, it winds up smacking her in the face. I LOVE THE ANGST, IT'S SO PAINFUL.

Very glad to see they got Sam back and very interested to see how the rest of this fic will go, especially now that Bela bolted...!

GUH. GUH. I have no words. I think you executed this whole chapter wonderful, naturally, and it worked so well. GREAT work. Super sensual and sexy and well done.

AW. I adore how this is progressing - they're still bantering and being snarky but now it's growing into affection and Feelings and Sharing Things and I LOVE IT. Guhh!

(I adore the description of how he smells. I don't like the smell of coffee but I just feel like smelling leather and soap and coffee and Dean on his jacket would be so, so very glorious. Mmm.)

I love her forcing him to pull over so she can drive and he can sleep. And him relazing enough to actually fall asleep.

Quick concrit note: I realize this is an old story so this might be totally irrelevant, but I thought I might point it out anyways. One thing I've noticed is that the POV shifts a little here and there in the same scenes. Like certain chunks are Bela POV, some are Dean, and then the odd bit is like third person removed POV. In the future, try to make sure you stick to one POV (once you have a divider/new scene, you can switch if you want to.)

Anyways, regardless of anything, I'm still completely enjoying this. :D

UGH - her being vulnerable! Him being protective! Their feelings (his!) starting to show!

I have a feeling they're force themselves back into their old banter, back onto familiar ground before too long, but I looove that Bela was all shell-shocked and troubled and Dean took care of her. I didn't realize how badly I needed this in my life into just now. XD

Ohmygosh. This killed me. I love the tension with the creepy hitman, then action of her running, the aftermath, and perfect tenderness from Dean. I LOVE THIS.