I just binge read the story and i loved it. i know its been nearly 3 years but please update i really want to see what happens next hope all is welltake care.

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY! WHEN DO YOU UPDATE?! I NEED MORE! And no, i am not insane. I just really love this story!

Great story :D sry if the rewiew is too short

First off Amazing story so far and instead of steal hunting knives and steal swords it should be steel swords and steel hunting knives.

Aaàaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww. This is one of my favorites! ( no offence to the hundred other authors that wrote the hundred other stories I've read.)

Personally I find that the story was very well until chapter 13 then I suggest you keep them as is and just rewrite the other chapters.

artemis is colder
she would never admit that tyo apolo

he acepted apolo to soon and the pens will stay like that permanantly

HSBFKhdfjkbgdslhbdbgfdljfgld, OC'S FTW

Sigh* OC stories are so under appreciated

Great chapter as always.

Wow I love that chapter! Keep up the great work

wow this story keeps getting better and better, keep up the amazing work.

Nice, I like it, and if I may... could I make a suggestion? As a son of Apollo and Champion to Zeus and Artemis, and is now easily the power of A God similar to Dionysus... could you maybe have him take over for Chiron, after a horde of beasts gets into the camp and he leads the fight against them even though he's new at Camp Half-blood? I know it's long and you probably have a plan but I would love to see him take a high role in the Camp almost imediatly

Loved it, and trust me I understand school taking up time, hell the only free time I have is past midnight. (Certain circumstances not included)