Sooooo. Anyone else take snippets of the voices of the characters and try to distort them to try and fit the story? I mean it's honestly amazing what imagination can do.

Very cute! I love seeing the domestic take on the RWBY gang. This story was very well-written, with great word choice and grammar. I really enjoyed the mud fight and could totally see that actually happening. I mean if a completely serious food fight can happen, why not? I hope you decide to pick this story back up but even if you don’t I’m perfectly content with what I got. Thanks for writing this! It put a big ‘ol smile on my face!

All of my yes.

Well, it was a treat to go through most of the RWBY fics. A lot of them haven't been updated in a while. But this one in particular is stupidly adorable.

I hope you'll get back to it someday :]

Thanks for the various stories, and I can't wait till the next update on either this, the other stories or 'A Dose of RWBY'.

Have a wonderful day (:

Are you gonna keep writing this?

OMG I NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED MORE PLEEEEEEEEEAAAASe!

This is a cute and well written story so far. I hope you plan on updating this and haven't decided to drop it.

This has got to be my favorite rwby fanfic ever! I don't mean to rush you but I'm definitely looking forward to the next few chapters! I can't imagine how cranky Weiss will get lol. You're an awesome author. Hope you have a nice day.

Bruh! Do you have palns to update this? Pls say yes

I really like the potential with this story. Other than a shortage of ideas I could see this running for a while. That said, I have to ask if this story is even alive anymore?

So much love and fluff I could drown

Like...wow, this is just simply amazing! I mean just wow. And I don't post reviews at all for whenever I read. Keep up the great work, I'll be looking forward to reading more chapters! Simply amazing.

One again great work.

Maybe Ren and Nora could have a BUNCH of kids. Imagine all the craziness that would happen with Nora and her crazy offspring (and poor Ren just watching from the sidelines, too used to all the madness to bother stopping it; unless it involved extreme leg breaking...).

Beyond the unexpected chicken, this was phenomenal. I pride myself on my descriptive work, but you make mine look like crap. I see no need to fill this box with superlatives, but rest assured that I could well have done. I have only a couple of complaints.

Firstly, with someone of your skill, it would be nice to see some minor word games (by this I mean alliteration, puns etc.) just to add that final touch.

Secondly, whilst I completely understand the desire to promote your own work, it would perhaps be better received if you didn't include the blurb at the end of each chapter. Stating that there's a link on your profile is fine, and it feels less like you've written this story purely as a means of including said promotion, which I'm sure isn't the case.

Those things aside, you have a genuine talent here and it's a pleasure reading your work.

Respectfully,

YellowSign.