I really like the plot, but I have to say... Since it's graylu, I would have to force myself to read it. I would love this if it was nalu. This is a great story and those graylu shippers are lucky to have it! I just can't read anything but nalu. The plot is super interesting and I got hooked right away! Great job!

UPDATES!so cool

This is interesting... Please update :)

I like it, but the scar scene kind of seemed dramatic

The story is good. :) Can't wait to read another chapter!:):):):)