Awesome!
Total plot twist! It brings in Mai's past and gives us an insight of what Mai's life before she met Naru and the gang.
I only have one question...
In the anime and manga, Mai wasn't an orphan until she was in middle school.
I'm just curious. Did you intentionally change the when she became an orphan or did you accidentally get your facts mixed up.
It's fine either way. I'm just curious.
Please update soon! :D

Awesome. I love the story so far your doing great update soon

Well then this is yet another fanfiction i've found today. Although i have to wonder why my name was used for the evil girl *is looking suspiciously at NIA* This is great though, definitely a different take on Luella then i'm used to but good none the less. Update soon please!

Why do I get the feeling that your a supernatural fan. :D

very interesting chapter. I can't wait for the next update.

Wow so Mai is a princess whose parents were brutally murdered? That's a shocker. Wonder if it's this so-called childhood friend who did it and why? Update soon please. :)

pretty pleeeaaaassssseeeeee make another chapter, i love the story its grate and you should update it!

i love this chapter. I can't wait to find out more about Mai and her past as well as Naru & Gene's part in it. please update again soon.

Great story. I'm already excited for the next chapter.

omg I Cant wait to read more :D

Yikes! Definitely a first fic where Luella is horrible! Wait-no there's a different fic where she just assumes Mai is a japanese whore Naru hired, and tries setting him up with a rich English bimbo.

Still x_x bit extreme in this case!

Hey Casey, just gotta say, this is an awesome story, loving it so much right now, and the fact you are doing it with Naru is cool, i'm also writing a story with Naru as well, we started about a month ago or so and have 4 chapters up, you can check it out if you want, Naru has it uploaded its called SPR and the White Thunder" I can't wait for the story of yours here to update, hope its soon. _

*stares open mouthed* 5 min later *same position* 30 min later *same* 2 hours later *same* 1 day later *smack* LUELLA CURSED MAI?! *restart*

*agent comes in* sorry about that. Kitty is very sensitive about these things. If she were able too she would say UPDATE!

Is Sam and dean from supernatural? Or was that just coincidental?

That's interesting, so Mai was adopted too. Makes me wonder if she's the girl Gene and Naru used to prank in the orphanage. Can't wait to read more.