When Eijun feel hurt seeing Miyuki with Furuya and very upset, I feel his pain! He deserve to get upset and avoid him.
I like when he chose to pitch with Kariba even though Miyuki already offer his assistance.
But also somewhat poor Miyuki, confused and end up get a bit jealous.
Everyone can tell something is going on between those two while Eijun is super Oblivious and Miyuki waiting for Eijun to being honest first. Lol
I'm glad it's somewhat resolved.
I Love it! XD

Sooooooo cute!

Aah, this is so cute!

Uwaaahhhh! That was so cute! I spent more than fifteen minutes on that last chapter, just trying to absorb the words and imagine the scenes and feel the emotion in each interactions...This is so beautifully written! Uwaaahh! I love it! But, but, also! The ending was so cute and sweet but STILL I can't help feeling/hoping/WISHING that it ended with something concrete in their relationship?..You know? Like, I'd be so totally happy if they could at least share one kiss. But, but, I'm also so very happy with it. Like, it could almost be canon but something concrete would still be the best. I'm still super happy though, thank you for writing this!And, uhm, ah, what about a sequel? Or even another series following this story. I just really want them to end up together!

Oh. He's so jealous. hihi. I understand completely. When I was watching the anime, I always felt irritated when Miyuki was paying so much attention on Furuya but otherwise ignoring Sawamura. I hated that, specially seeing that Sawamura was trying so hard for Miyuki to acknowledge him.. TT Anyway. Good chapter. I like how their relationship is progressing slowly (though it is a bit irritating that Miyuki seems so ignorant of how much he's hurting Sawamura). I don't like fast-paced relationship that much, so I'm uber happy that this one is slow-paced. I like that Sawamura would interpret that painful feeling in his stomach as a result of something he ate - he's so adorably naive that way. Makes me want to hug and keep him so stupid Miyuki wouldn't be able to hurt him anymore.
On to the next chapter.
(I feel kind of sad, like I don't want to click next, knowing that it'll be the last chapter... TTTT.. I wish this was longer)

Uwaah! OMG! I'm so happy you wrote this. I read that doujin just the other day - I'm extremely new to this fandom - and although it was super cute (the doujin), it left me with unsatisfied feelings in my stomach. I thought it should have a part two because seriously, these two deserves more chances to fall in love because they're two adorable dorks who belong to each other. So, thank you, thank you! I'm glad that this fanfic is here. Hopefully, they'll have a cute, sugary ending that will leave a delicious feeling in my chest after I'm done reading. .

I've read the doujin, and I really like that doujin along with the one about coffee... it was so cute and endearing... and seriously makes my heart hurts so much.
That's why I tried this story out.
I almost disappointed when I read the first chapter. It was almost precisely similar with the doujin, thus had me thinking, why the heck you repeat it all again?
But then, I am only a reader, I can only accept and guess that maybe you want your own version of dialogues in that scene. And it seems the original author do not mind, so I don't think I should bother about it.
Thank God, there is the continuation of the first chapter. The rest of the chapters really makes me forget what I feel about the first chapter.
so, nah, the real review begins now. (I somehow feel like a bastard, so sorry if I offended you or something; I assure you it's not a flame.)

chapter 2 and 3 is somehow frustratingly cute! I am really... eeekkkhh... miyukiii! and Eijun! Their 'unresolved sexual tension' is just too much, I want to smack their head or something!
Miyuki is teasing Eijun too much. Spare the poor heart ;_;
And I thought Miyuki would be kissing him on the lips... ah well, forehead is okay. I feel the gesture as gentle and deep.
Miyuki is thoughtful to give Eijun the easy way out... Asssssss, Miyuuuukiii, you're so cool *u*
Aah... I want Miyuki's POV too :'(
Thanks for the story :)

I love your story... very2 luv

Amazing. This three-shot is amazing! I love every part of it and I'm so glad such a talented writer is writing for this fandom and for my favourite OTP too! Thank you so much for this beautiful piece! I'll probably keep rereading this for a long time! Great job!

Crap. This threeshot is so adorable, I just - I can't describe it. I was kept on edge the whole time, wondering what was about to happen next.

AND OH MY GOSH, even though I love Miyuki, seeing him ignored is just a "HAHAHA! In your face!" Moment from me. I mean, really. It's not easy to make Miyuki seem confused and out of his wits because, well, it's just not him. Yet you were able to portray his actions in a way that won't contradict his personality, so good job! And even though I love seeing Miyuki tease Eijun, what I love even more is having Eijun turn the tables on Miyuki, albeit unconsciously. Too funny, hahahahah!

Again, amazing work, and I can't wait to read more from you!

ughh can't wait for more! /

Whyyyyyy must u leave at such a dramatic awesome filled part of the storryyyy DX I'm always checking if uve updated this lol XD pls update soon! It's a great story!

Well, I didn't see that coming, with Mimi
Miyuki suddenly paying attention to Furuya... I'm really liking it, very well done, and I'm excited for the next part!

This story is marvellous! And I like the fact that you put Kyuugou's Singin' in the rain at its basis:) Reading her doujinshi I remember being upset that the author left us with the open ending and now you are here to make us happy with the continuation! Yay!
I adore your characterization of Miyuki and Eijun! And I like that you make only Eijun's POV so that Miyuki's thoughts are not clear and we don't know what's behind his actions.
As for the 2d chapter, Miyuki's and Eijun's messages to each other were wonderful, it's great that in the end Eijun didn't answer Miyuki, heheh.
Your story is one of those that I don't want to be finished soon, so I root for the main characters to continue being the idiots they are :)
Thank you! I hope to see more from you!

Dang the feels! DX
Nicely written :D I hope Sawamura gets with Miyuki soon! Miyuki u better realize ur kohais waiting for u DX
Looking forward to the next update! :D