Reviews for The Legend of END
sonicgoku203 chapter 4 . 3/2
please continúe the history
Dr Yandere chapter 3 . 8/16/2019
Too bad it got discontinued.
Natsu chapter 2 . 3/13/2018
You're a funny human! You sound how I sound when I'm hungry! And who exactly is in the harem with me other than Erza who I approve of and do love?
Viperino chapter 4 . 12/30/2017
love the story. Hope you decide to do more.
Guest chapter 4 . 9/25/2017
Why u abandon :( FU
LyHy chapter 3 . 4/8/2017
Please write more!
Angryhenry chapter 4 . 6/13/2016
Can't wait for next chapter
XxElementalStormxX chapter 1 . 4/6/2016
Cool
Scullion Reed chapter 4 . 12/3/2015
So, if you're caught up with the manga, how's your mind now? I know things have gone a different way, but I really enjoy this story. Look, I don't update, waaayyy to busy/lazy. I understand on not wanting to continue, just know that when and if you do update, I'll be very thankful and will be sure to read it.
Uchiha Natsumi chapter 4 . 11/17/2015
cuando Natsu se dará cuenta que Ultear lo está persiguiendo
Titania1796 chapter 4 . 9/29/2015
el fic es increible pero en realidad Natsu es el hermano menor de Zeref espero que actualices pronto
TSoFI chapter 4 . 9/24/2015
Nice chapter. I like how you've handled everything so far. There's few things that need improvement, but it's solid all around. A bit more variety in his dialogue against the Doomguard in chapter 3 would have helped. Also, Mard Geer always refers to Mard Geer as Mard Geer, so I would change Mard Geer's dialogue to show Mard Geer's third-person speaking quirk...Mard Geer. I kinda want to see him storm the palace and somehow end up making Hisui into another harem mate.

****On the tiniest chance you don't already know Natsu's past with Zeref, SPOILERS****

Funnily enough, your theory regarding Natsu and Zeref's relationship is only half-wrong. I suppose you already know this, but they're brothers rather than father and son, and he dind't die of Zeref's curse. Despite this, this theory works out nicely anyway, so there's no need to change anything.

I wonder if it was Ur or Ultear. Considering its implied he was found by more than one person, my money's on Ur, although I'm hoping its really Ultear.

Anyway, I hope to see this continue soon. I want to see what happens when he eventually runs into Fairy Tail, and I want to see your take on his unrevealed Etherious form.
Guest chapter 4 . 9/11/2015
Love your story but I wonder how much fairy tail would change sence natsu is not the cause and effect with out natsu every one at the Gould would turn out differently may be you should have every thing go south again and when natsu time travels again he just goes back to before everyone died I hope you update soon
Unknown4 chapter 4 . 7/25/2015
I hope you continue this story because I'm still waiting I'm a big fan of this story and I re-read the chapters 4 time I hope you keep this story going because I want to know what happens next.
Adalricus Victorius chapter 1 . 7/24/2015
Great story
please update
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