And one year, x months later... Idk, I love your story

Go all the way. With Tom's help she could be a formidable dark witch, maybe even help him improve too. I'm sure he can explain to her why dark magic isn't bad, silencing her conscience and corrupt her to the point it isn't bothering any more.

If the books are based on her, does that mean she'll fail and Voldemort will lose?

Oh my, I am realllllly into this... Please update?

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I like your story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update as soon as possible.
Greetings from Paris, France.

Yeah, I noticed the rating change when I got the alert, thank you for verifying it, though, I was confused for a moment. So Tom appears to be teaching Lily dark magic, this will be interesting.

Should I be worried about the future chapters?
-PT :)

I love this! Update soon!

Ah! Very good then carry on! :) Can't wait for the next chapter! I don't really have a review for this chapter except that I think it was a transition chapter which makes me very excited to see what happens next!

I can't see any repetitions here!
-PT :)

Great chapter, but you used 'played on his/her lips' a little to much
-PT :)

I think you should put her in Ravenclaw. Her desire to learn about time travel and her desire to be able to use her magic at will seems to be the main part of her personality. I like the sotry so far and can't wait to read more.
Until next time.

Please update soon

Well this is different! I am rather curious about this my one problem is that I feel like Lily is seven and not eleven. I mean she doesn't know a thing about her parents or grandparents or anything she feels too sheltered and I feel like she acts younger than she really is. I can understand though if this is all for plot and it doesn't bug me enough to not continue reading this story so keep updating!

This story is good. Go on. I like ít.